Hot Sand Dunes Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Great visualization in this poem. That's what good poetry should be.

We get the picture, Very well, Plus feeling, the heat, As well. Got to run and put some water on my face, no kidding. Loved it. Amazing, what sheer and total writing talent can do.

A fabulous brief work with fascinating imagery! A very creditable piece of work.......10

motionless air hot sand cause of global warming and the water is there precious life giver........../// great write

A lovely marvelous haiku, dear Ate Rose....10++++

How succinctly you glorify Nature there! Beauty is in the beholders' eyes. So is In the poets' expressive wonderment. Brilliant piece Rose Marie 10+

Visiting this poem again, here is an example of a poem's structure can do, what implying can do instead of using direct words like sermons. Subtlety thy name is poetry. All these aspects are reflected in this piece in plenty. A piece par excellence.

The value of precious water has been expressed fantastically in this three line poem.

On the vast sand dunes Only hot motionless air Water is like gold.

Exactly, in deserts and in most countries in Africa (I have experienced that myself) there is no good water or no water at all. That's why the NL has made in the African countries many water wells so that the inhabitants can get fresh clean water every day. Water is the most important thing in our daily activities.(life) . A 10+++++++++++ and this jewel goes to MyPoemList. God's Blessings in Abundance for thee and thy beloved family.