Hottest Undone! Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Hottest Undone!

Rating: 3.8


in a cup of life
only spring was
no contrition of winter or summer
stung its grass

a piece of embroidered noon of autumn
and the soaked story of love was born
in my heart
of flapping flirt!

on the drunkard wings
the swallow fluttered,
boozy lunch undressed
the body on soul featured
Rope of my life
made of wax
now melting and
dispersal anthrax

under the sexiest fate-sun
the broker of hope shears earth's earn
burned! burned!
hottest undone!



-August 25,2019 Chattogram

Monday, August 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: disaster,earth,ruins
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 08 September 2019

in my heart Of flapping flirt! ..........lovely piece. Thank u, dear poet.anjandev roy.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 September 2019

A great thoughtful poem, a disaster looks very close, the ship of the earth has to reduce the increasing burden of growing population, who will be thrown into the ocean and who will continue the sailing, perhaps nature has left it for the probability.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 August 2019

under the sexiest fate-sun the broker of hope shears earth's earn burned! burned! hottest undone! in my experience the HOTTEST DAY LIES INSIDE A BEDSHEET AS IN THE DARKNESS OF NIGHT

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 August 2019

Now melting! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 August 2019

NICE SEXY METAPHORICALLY @33 PLUS

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