This a beautiful hymn we offer
Singing your glory continuously,
In half of this Earth is mindday,
Midnight is there in rest half.
This Earth is same, time is same,
Perception differs but sun is same,
This is light reflected, it turns,
You are eternal, we souls are too.
With change we are not attached,
Constantly we are in communication,
You are very lovely brightest daddy,
Hymn here we sing is also sung there.
Midday replaces midnight in cycle,
Light sends back far to the darkness.
Overcoming obstacles we souls sing,
This hymn is offered to you God.
Goodness of trust is seen in mind,
Kind father by your grace we live,
Verses of hymn we chant everyday,
We feel your grace and presence.
Fine use of contrast between midday and midnight, which occur simultaneously on opposites sides of the Earth. You have composed a moving hymn to God and His wonderful creation.
Superb concept....nicely crafted work....yes, for half of earth it's day while for the rest it's night...in cycles and recycles...all by that great One above...thank you Kumar for sharing this meaningful poem here...God bless you
Great poem devoted to the eternal glory of the Lord. Whatever we see or watch around us is a part of a divine arrangement. Thanks for sharing this amazing poem of gratefulness. Kind father by your grace we live, everyday....We feel your grace and presence.
It is midday here and it is midnight there. Yet everyone trusts the same -Truth You are. A hymn of beautiful lines.
The goodness of Our Lord, the grace and awe of Our Heavenly Father! .. Thank you so much for sharing! ..
A Beautiful Beautiful hymn! .. That opens our hearts and minds! .. Ever so Inspirational! .. Beyond #ing! ..++++++++++++++++++++
Midnight in cycle! ! ! 🌝🌌✍ Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A hymn singing straight from the soul, my friend. Your love and trust glows in every line. I have a particular affinity to the following line among so many heart-touching lines: Overcoming obstacles we souls sing, This hymn is offered to you God......................................... You present a holy offering to our God. Thank you for sharing it with us. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ as a poem and beyond measure as a revelation of faith!
A nice poem in His praise. Though we keep ourselves with our mundane chores He remains always in our heart and constantly guides us. Nicely done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem depicting total surrender before the almighty after realization of His power and control over the universe. It also highlights the thinking process that has been twisted in Vanprasthashram the third stage in one's life as described by Hinduism through it's scriptures.10 points.