lady grace

I Am Comfortable

and when the clouds gather rains

in the vast oceanic sky

when the moon-faded light

resting sleep in sun’s hottest eyes...

Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 4, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 20, 2009

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  • Rm. Shanmugam ChettiarRm. Shanmugam Chettiar (10/19/2009 8:57:00 AM)

    a good anology. marks 10 shan

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  • Jazlle Hugo **contentment is the key to happiness (10/15/2009 3:12:00 PM)

    After the rain we are comfortable with the warmth of the sun. In any pace of life just hang on with HIM. Great write. Thanks!

    best regards,
    jdh

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  • Rafique Farooqi (10/14/2009 7:15:00 AM)

    It is wonderful GRACE, get relaxed in happy weahers

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  • Joey Valenzuela (10/11/2009 9:17:00 PM)

    oh lady grace...you're from phil? ?
    did you lose someone after peping stroke? ? ?

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  • Noel Horlanda (10/11/2009 2:16:00 AM)

    yeah, lots of tears, faded moons, such a sad tale. An honest to goodness poetry.

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  • Akram Awadat (10/6/2009 5:18:00 AM)

    very nice and beautiful description

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  • C. P. SharmaC. P. Sharma (10/6/2009 2:02:00 AM)

    The oceanic sky
    Rains God's Grace
    Warmth of the sun
    Your heart trace
    Cool moon light's
    Soothing embrace
    Weave superb imagery
    O Lady Grace! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    CP

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  • Antonio Liao (10/5/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    as silent ponder the night....the poem gallops the entity of superb
    lines of reality...God bless.... a true rhythm of truth... a 10 +

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/5/2009 8:06:00 AM)

    and when the clouds gather rains
    in the vast oceanic sky
    when the moon-faded light
    resting sleep in sun’s hottest eyes.............if one canadjust with chaning scenerio or difficultiees, nothing can alter the path or deter us from pursuing the goal///// very good write....10 i like dit mot....

    read mine i may not withdraw......step-in-stone

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  • Catrina Heart (10/5/2009 2:06:00 AM)

    a nice little poem with a short description of your life...in any pace u r comfortable, good for you! ! ! well done............

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  • Patti Masterman (10/4/2009 5:28:00 PM)

    Your poems have a rich and musical vocabulary.

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  • Rafique Farooqi (10/4/2009 12:40:00 PM)

    Sun and moon are comforting you, ........i love short. poems

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  • Rajaram RamachandranRajaram Ramachandran (10/4/2009 10:01:00 AM)

    You are so comfortable when the moon fades its light and the sun starts its heat.

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  • Eyan Desir (10/4/2009 6:42:00 AM)

    You are comfortable eating food
    and chatting with friends
    you forgot to add this to your poem
    anyway good try
    4 nice lines....

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  • Ramin ChamanRamin Chaman (10/4/2009 3:54:00 AM)

    when the moon-faded light...]


    A nice line..too.

    And very peremptory...

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  • Ramesh T ARamesh T A (10/4/2009 3:23:00 AM)

    Beautiful gathering rage of Nature well expressed! Especially contrast is wonderful in brief!

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  • Mohammed AlbalushiMohammed Albalushi (10/4/2009 3:21:00 AM)

    nice rhythm and wonderful poem, i like it

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