Leaves covering my body
laying
on earth
on soil
your sweat protecting my body
your tears in my hair
the moon is whispering
you are now his woman
Well penned. A poem that I can read over and over again.. thanks for sharing.... God bless!
Umm mmm, that feels so good..you discribe this phenomenon with visceral gusto! ~
very elegantly put... da topic of da p[oem has been handled very nice
Spoken as a true wife would moon light soft upon such hair for a women such as this has no real regrets Nice soft touch upon the word
So lovely Pia. Your poem has beauty in it's simplicity. Thank you. Simone :)
It is true..it is deep.. too keep yourself... from being found.....iip
LOVELY..SIMPLY DEEP..THE IMAGERY AND THOUGHT BOUNDLESS
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is simply great. Gives rise to so many thoughts, so many interpretations........thickly woven enigma of a poem