.... I Am Sorry.******** Poem by Eyan Desir

the poem '...I am sorry...() ' is a stron g message of maturity- to say sorry is diffecult to some because it shows weakness, however, it is a strenght that contoured the inner part of our human tendency to love, to believe and to hope for what is best and good. the poem has its own style that is qualified to be a master piece in the descipline of poetry.

very heartfelt you said alot in just a few words very good....10++++

Simple and touchy poem.10++ from me.

I like it.. so deeply regretful and am sure, the person whom its written for, will melt with the streaming tears, and will return to you with remorse, and together you both will build mansions with love, and empires.. 10 for u! !

Fine apologising perhaps will break the heart beloved? Everything depends on it, what your hero did mischief. However the fact that he is able to admit to having made a mistake and to say is important 'I was wrong, I apologise'. It will improve his situation certainly. Very much I like your poem, because it is talking about the respect for the second man. An admission of guilt and repairing, what was bad, are just showing not only feeling, but also the respect to the man. Because... when it is possible to be friends, to love, and what's more to know, if the respect was missing? It isn't possible. (10v.) Greetings for you. Maria Barbara Korynt

You have proven to the world that there's finally a man out there. It takes alot of courage to say that you're sorry. An apology well written very deep indeed.

asking an apology is a sign of good manners doctor..nicely written..grace

made me cry, not many guys i know would say i'm sorry, a really good poem! ! ! filed with regrect and sorrow over something done, very nice poem

this is nice...the hardest thing is to realize that you was wrong but to write it too good job

it takes a real man to say 'I'm sorry'. saying it again tells otherwise. show out the best in you and be happy! : -)