I can die
for the shine in your eye
For the beat of your heart
For that giggle smart
For the dream that you dream
For the hopes that you bear
Deep down your heart
I can die
For the moments you give
The joys to live
The pain you take
To correct my mistake
The concern you show
Generous wealth you blow
I can die
For a moment of relief
For you and your belief
To alleviate a grain of pain
To walk a step with you everyday
I can die, I must say....
11th july 200c
emotional piece nikunj.depicts a nice, caring, understading soul in u. lucky is the one for whom u wrote.
Oh, come on, don't die! This is a beautiful piece. Thank you for making me smile: -)
If you die....Who will write in your place? :) No one can replace your works like you write them. Deborah Cromer
wow....expression of great and burning love... very lucky girl...someone who is willing to die for her... very meaningful.... so lovely...very touching poem.. i love this... 10++++ lovelots, maia
For a moment of relief For you and your belief To alleviate a grain of pain To walk a step with you everyday I can die, I must say.... I know how it feels like to wish to live a life-time in a moment..it took my breath away. thanks Niks for writing such a lovely and divine poem. 18th August,2009
A flowing emotional poem that touches on the hearts of your readers. Please don't die as we need good writers like you Nikunj. Top marks Karin Anderson
anyone can die for these things..........nice write Nikunj
this is truly a poetic piece..nice to read..expressions to the max..grace
very emotional lines You are lucky to have such a person to die for regards sandhya
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a poem full of emotions and your belief To alleviate a grain of pain To walk a step with you everyday I can die, I must