I Choose To Rise Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Beautiful! ! ! The closing 4 lines are majestic like mountains=====> I long to stand upright Though bent with baggage of time / Like a mountain I wear a stony face/ With dreams buried in caves of silence < === that is extraordinary writing, Nosheen 10+++++ and onto my fav list

As soon as I say the title I came running as it reminded me of a poem that I wrote, I Choose the Mountain... I was not disappointing. In fact, it is simply sublime!

I choose to rise......very beautiful and enjoyable poem shared thanks for sharing.....deserves great 10++ I choose to rise rise high high from the obnoxious mind high, wanna fly more high more than the mountain more, more wanna fly over the sky...........

Congrats on reaching 300 poems. They are all very impressive!

Telling, trenchant, poignant... these are some words that come to mind. I think perhaps you live within sight of mountains, so you spontaneously commune with them.

I long to stand upright Though bent with baggage of time Like a mountain I wear a stony face With dreams buried in caves of silence--A wonderful poem.

'the sailing clouds that carry a rain of sorrow'. Beautiful expression, Nosheen

"I choose to rise Like a mountain in love with the sky"

This is true poetry that carries us away! And makes us feel the the temple of creatton besutifully never. And exquiste, contemplative piece so sweet to read and to be remembered.