I send you to a windy dust
before I inhale you
I exhale you....
I leave you with your lust
Okay I've never really liked short poems, havn't seen any point to them, but that was realy good, straight to the point and I could feel the emotion of it just from those four lines...Good work =)
Sorry, i must just be in awe? ? Either that or i have no sense as a poet... 'Before I inhale you I exhale you' I like alot, a great choice of words, Enjoy....
Is it a purging out lust…symbolically but what about innate sensuousness? An enigma poet gave readers to workout. Ten.[goofed - vote box] dr. sakti Cordially invite to my page [poem] read / comment and….
You leave the reader in a quandary in the dust of lust wanting more but blown away mmmm++++10 regards
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
simple true and to the point. I love short poems!