I Fell Into The Sky Poem by Beach Girl

I Fell Into The Sky

Rating: 4.4


As I awoke this morning, I fell into the sky

The ocean left right after me and gracefully rolled by


The elephants stood on their toes and did a little dance

Pansies grew up ten feet tall and frightened little ants


I hear the mountains packed their bags and moved to Oklahoma

Palm trees put on winter coats and left for Nova Scotia


Birds decided not to fly and ordered Mini Coopers

Clouds became immovable and fell into a stupor


Rivers ran like two way streets confounding fish and men

Lemons, limes, they all grew sweet, causing kids to grin


Soon I awoke from this strange dream, and sighed a little sigh

Recalled the weird and wondrous as I fell into the sky

Thursday, May 9, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cassandra Jasmine 02 September 2013

I love this poem so much! It sounds like a flowing river of honey. A beautiful fantasy.10/10! Cassandra

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Excellent..wish i can say better words than that.. You've got a brilliant imagery and i swear i got lost in it. Beautifully penned packed with fun too :)

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Kevin East 14 August 2013

love your imagery...nice stuff!

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Khairul Ahsan 13 August 2013

A nice fantasy ride.

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Heather Wilkins 23 July 2013

a nice write with good imagery. another fantasy dream

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Rob Lamberton 06 February 2023

A world turned upside down makes me sigh too, and wish it was a dream!

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Marvellous recounting of an (imaginary) dream..

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 September 2019

Soon I awoke from this strange dream, and sighed a little sigh Recalled the weird and wondrous as I fell into the sky.. love, comfort, nature, beauty, dream. love ur poem. tony

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Katie Webster 01 May 2018

You drew me in with the title! I thoroughly enjoyed

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Jette Blackstone 14 October 2017

A fun poetic fantasy!

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