I gave a poem to a painter;
It came out with its heart inside
In colorful lines illustrate...
I gave a portrait to a poet;
It came out with its heart inside
In musical lines laureate!
May15th 2009
Your intelligence appeared strongly throught this poem..althought it is short but it is superb! ! ...........keep it up..10+++........Merna
I'll give a poem you and it will come out with heart clean and message clear
Colourful lines and musical lines.....both have different charms dear poet. One soothes to the eye but another soothes to the ear. A fascinating poem. Loved it.
it is really good when we can influence others... nice poem!
POENTER [Poet and Painter] very nicely merged with tinsel words and miniscule of hues… Ten+ [from heart] Ms. Nivedita UK
A wisdom, colourful and melodious poem, well crafted.10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Short, sweet, wise and obviously well thought out. Thank you for sharing your talent :)