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I Have Learnt To Live - Poem by JENIE FRANKSAY

it took late a bit.
from whom it
doesnt matter much.

now i know,
what is happiness & sorrow.
both are moments' guest,
neither they stop nor rest.

life is coloured by these two,
life smiles and frowns too.
that is it, that is it.
i have learnt to live late a bit.

Comments about I Have Learnt To Live by JENIE FRANKSAY

  • Shania K. Younce (10/5/2013 4:27:00 PM)

    I do declare it is quite fine. (Report) Reply

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  • Heather Wilkins (7/12/2013 11:38:00 AM)

    we all must learn the joys and sorrows of life. We are not promised a rose garden. there will always be thorns in our path. nice write (Report) Reply

  • (7/7/2013 2:51:00 PM)

    Nicely written poem, enjoyed it.
    Siya_! !
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  • (6/26/2013 11:04:00 PM)

    Time will teach and heals everything. loved reading thro' those phrases. Good write, keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • (6/26/2013 12:26:00 AM)

    Nice poem, idea, rymngs....

    Sm whr feels lik v both r in sam boat.....
    (Report) Reply

  • Vishal Sharma (6/25/2013 7:59:00 AM)

    please write some happy words
    (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (6/25/2013 7:22:00 AM)

    Its not too we have more time to live, we never too late to learn as everyday lesson may repeat the previous one, yesterday or long before...i like this spirit in you..keep it up_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Yasmin Khan (6/25/2013 6:06:00 AM)

    wisdom and understanding speak here in theses nicely penned lines. (Report) Reply

  • (6/24/2013 9:17:00 PM)

    short and sweet
    charming and delightful
    (Report) Reply

  • Sj Holland (6/24/2013 8:38:00 PM)

    I like the smart, clever way you arranged your phrases, and how they all work together to make one point. You kept to your subject very well. And it's about a great life lesson. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 25, 2013

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