I'M Cool With That Poem by Will Barber

I'M Cool With That

Rating: 5.0


Come praise the stars, the wind, the rain
That course the earth; come praise the pain
And pleasure that the years bring forth:
Praise every particle of the Universe.

Doubt denials of the flame
Which courses through the hearts of men:
The ones who lose, the ones who win,
Are indistiguishable, in the end.

The wretched and the fortunate
Will join each other in the dark
Those who were wrong, those who were right
Will join each other in the Light.

Light and Dark will alternate
Eternally: this is man's fate.
Come, laugh; come, commiserate.
Dance your day, and sing your night.

2006

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tailor Bell 03 September 2007

There is no line that is not a favorite in this...and (in my wittiest repertoire) my most favorite line has to be 'Doubt denials of the flame'. I may be taking it out of context (of course I'm known to do that) but this is the diamond point of your stylus for me, the mature kernel from which the rest sprouts. philosophical balance and a magnificent work, Will. -Tailor

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William Jackson 29 July 2007

Well said, Will. It reminds me of Cool Tombs by Carl Sandburg, specifically, 'Pocahontas’ body, lovely as a poplar, sweet as a red haw in November or a pawpaw In May, did she wonder? Does she remember? ... in the dust, in the cool tombs? Take any streetful of people buying clothes and groceries, cheering a hero or throwing confetti and blowing tin horns... tell me if the lovers are losers... tell me if any get more than the lovers... in the dust... in the cool tombs.'

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Robert Howard 04 February 2007

Great poem. A beautiful affirmation of life told with effortless rhythm. Perfect title.

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Emma Johnson 29 January 2007

Beautiful and elating. Susie Zuheir Gharib. Love.

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Patrick Ladbrooke 25 January 2007

This is really excellent Will, good philosophical content, and a sublime verse. Top drawer, good luck! Patrick

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Chinedu Dike 25 October 2019

Well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Will.

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 16 October 2015

Love this poem. A fine piece of penning.... Kudos

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Luis Gil 09 May 2009

A message of acceptance and responsibility. A hymn of praise and affirmation of life. Very wise and balanced composition. It was a message I needed to hear. I wish I could feel the same way.

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Ernestine Northover 21 June 2008

Couldn't have been written better. Beautiful piece which explains all. Your message is received and understood. Over and out. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Ana Monnar 13 September 2007

This has been a great day for finding great poems and this is one of them. Excellent literary piece.

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