I'M Gonna Leave This World.. Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN
I'M Gonna Leave This World..
To-day I need a lurking place;
Can I thirst with my eyes peace?
All the hope gifted me pain,
All the dream lost in vain,
Nothing survives me in the vale of tears,
And nor a glow in the sky of my stars.
Oh, make free me as a man, dead.
I like to fly as a soul but ne'er I did,
A disharmonious deed in this world,
May my pains be squeezed out as blood!
I'd like to wander as a soul in the sky,
As I am now drowning in the struggles-sea,
I need a freedom from this life.
Amidst all the shadows of hate were rife.
I'm gonna see a pool of blood;
I'm gonna leave this world.
Dark. Very dark. And passionate. This line: As I am now drowning in the struggles-sea, I need a freedom from this life. especially caught my attention. You are a skilled writer!
'Amidst all the shadows of hate were rife. I'm gonna see a pool of blood; I'm gonna leave this world. ' Beautiful lines, truly a phenomenal write.
A very sad poem, a beautiful poem. Sometimes our demons seem to take over, They fill our minds with thoughts that are not really ours. We have to fight them, and when we win, we are a much better person for it. The demons can never win. We are born to beat them. It is our destiny to beat them, to help others in poems. A good poem my friend.
Life, which is good, consists of pleasure and, unfortunately, pain. Such pain is sometimes overwhelming; we simply long to escape it all.
Hey Vipins, wake up...are you got bad day dreaming again...where are you going if you decide to leave this world? ? wanna go space outside, well think twice, no oxygen for you there my dear friend hahaha...Joking, what's wrong Vipins, come on tell me what is bothering your mind...'pool of blood', hey better we donate to hospital hahaha...world is able to bend in many shape as you want if you try to change..dont let sad taking over your soul..i know what you can do..BIG SMILE, sure not bitter like pills..yuck! ! ! come one Vipins, wake up, stand strong and still in this world, space outside dont have good curry you know, Only india got it :) Cheer some_Unwritten Soul
Good strong piece of writing. Some of the language almost resembles Christian prayer. Good sense of flow as if wallow in the struggles of life.
Death is something I have experienced a lot of this year and have written on it too. Very well written Vipins, very emotional.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/7/2025 2:44:35 AM # 1.0.0
Depressing but thats the subject matter, the language is rich and filled with amzing texture fantastic write, don't leave this world becasue I want you to write more. Regards