I'm The Me, Sin Refugee Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

I'm The Me, Sin Refugee

Rating: 5.0


I have no Lord!
I'm in no God!

Oh, I'm the punishment of the opened pains
the cursed in the blessed world for the bragging

here in the inn of heart
the holy wine glass
filled with burning coal;
I drink it ravishingly as well as ravenously

I'm going to die
death kisses me mirthfully
I regain the life of humiliation

Oh, no mortification of thought
cuddling me
here I'm the me, Sin Refugee
wandering port to city
known to unknowingly

no home I make
on the dew of arum leaf
shining more than rising sun
but after a while much burn

I'm in the burned heart
burning odour I'm in the ghost
likely most living in death


-11/26/2019 10: 54: 00 PM CTG, BD

I'm The Me, Sin Refugee
Wednesday, November 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: belief,conflict,life,self,vanity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From my comment on "Sin Shall Not Reign In Us" poem by Dr. Antony Theodore 11/26/2019 10: 54: 00 PM
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 28 November 2019

We feel very depressed at times.....! But never give in to depression! Life is not to be wasted on harrowing thoughts. Life is to enjoy and help others enjoy! I sense deep melancholy in your lines. Quite touching.....! ! (I have been trying to post comments on your poems. But due to some technical error, I am not able to comment on many of the poems on poem hunter....It is so annoying)

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 November 2019

And this 'I' used here is the universal I, we all are included well nigh, we all live our lives knowingly, a sinful life unrepentantly, making the same mistake again and again, condemned to come and go in pain... a lovely self analysis.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 November 2019

wow it's great substance; thanks you Sir, Thanks a lot

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Gajanan Mishra 27 November 2019

Living in death, good write

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 November 2019

A powerful poem that vividly portrays a conflict experienced.in oneself. Commission of sins through life will burn the heart, ultimately killing us. An existence without meaning. Another poem of great depth. Cleverly written.

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