I May Stay With You Forever Poem by Dee Daffodil

I May Stay With You Forever

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I may stay with you forever,
If you'll only grant me love.

There are hearts in need of mending,
Souls, I need to fix.
People are depending,
On my love.

Please do not try to cage me,
Within the confines of your heart.

There are hearts,
So badly shattered,
So distraught,
So roughly tattered.

There are hearts in need of mending,
And souls I need to fix.

June 3,2006 by Dee Daffodil (H.W)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 01 June 2006

Well considering it is only June 2nd, even where you are ~HW~ this is a real enigma of a poem. Very good though, it is true that we all have others hearts to consider but in the great scheme of life, we must take care of our own heart first and foremost. Should that be please to, or do I wonder? both fit well. Smiling at you, Tai

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Dan Tharp 01 June 2006

I noticed a couple of typos in this one... In the title 'Fowever'? And in the first line of the 3rd verse 'to' I believe should be 'do'? dan

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David Darbyshire 02 June 2006

Darling are you a DIY specialist? fixing all thats broke, you are tooooo sweet, dave xx have a great weekend dave xxx

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Dr.subhendu Kar 08 October 2007

I may stay with you forever, If you'll only grant me love.............the unique way of loving this world, that evokes as to how love is the binding force that cohered us within this earth blazing the peace and fellowf-eeling, as love is transcened by the soul, i adore and admre, well done Dee......thanks

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Kee Thampi 15 June 2006

There are hearts in need of mending, Souls, I need to fix. People are depending, On my love. This is a gift of real talent and made it in this poem

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Mary Nagy 14 June 2006

Aww! What a caring soul you've shown here. I really love this one. Isn't is funny when we feel we have to ''Save the world....'' ? But, luckily some people feel this way! Great write! Sincerely, Mary

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Geoff Warden 10 June 2006

Hearts to mend.......excellent choice........great write....

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Duncan Wyllie 03 June 2006

Please think about yourself also througth all this Dee, a kind heart indeed Love Duncan X

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