I Never Saw Her Cry. Poem by Ann Beard

I Never Saw Her Cry.

Rating: 5.0


She did not shed a single tear,
the weeks that she lay dying.
No pain was felt to feed her fear
the morphine soaked up every tear
I never saw her crying.

She'd only ask, 'Don't leave me here
alone, she says, while sighing.
I held her hand, sat very near
played music loud so she could hear.
I never saw her crying.

And now the silence deafens,
in the now quite empty house.
Unwelcome is the errant tear,
from memories of this past year.
Reminding me, I never saw her crying.


Roan May 2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Blakemore 30 January 2008

Such emmotion pours from each word. Lovely poem Ann. Andrew x

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Richard Deets 27 January 2008

Ann, Your poem is not only well written, it is particularly sensitive to the subject of your poem. A couple house keeping chores: I think you want to close the quotes after the word, 'alone'. Where the word 'there, s' appears, I think you want 'there's'. Keep writing on these sensitive subjects. Thank you for your comments on my poem, 'We Sailed on With Happy Hearts.'

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You really did an excellent job putting across the pain and love felt as this brave woman spent her last breaths.

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Jim Meakin 01 December 2007

Excellent Anne I can fully appreciate the feelings here and also the way in which it is written Jim

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Emancipation Planz 21 September 2007

Heart wrenching by the bucket loads... some ends of life are tenderly balanced by the drips of morphine that replaces the stole-end tears... Not only were your hands able to reach out and hold comfort but you are able to write words that can continually be passed on

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Irene Clark-hogg 24 July 2009

Dear friend Ann, I have read this poem before, but it moved me too much to comment. Now I return to say thank you for sharing it with us. If a poem is well written it is good. If it can also link the reader and poet emotionally, it is excellent. Irene

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I Am Charlie 18 June 2009

if ever the time came that we could choose favourite poets...well. your definately one of mine. I wonder, if someone close passed away?

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Ron Flowers 29 September 2008

This is a wonderful poem. Iove your rhym scheme and it's all so natural. This is my kind of poem. Ron

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Charles M Moore 17 April 2008

Straight talking sentiments that add to the pleasure of this peice.

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Duncan Wyllie 06 March 2008

I agree with Andrew here, the emotion is very powerful in this, you have put alot into this Thankyou for sharing such a personal write Love duncan X

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