Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

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I Peep On You

Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

I peep on you
When you say
You don’t love me
I saw your rose pulps

I peep on you
I saw you rested your love
On the bowl

I peep on you
I saw your barbaric tits waving
Water dripping from there
Right to your squirrel

I peep on you
I saw your squirrel
Wet but breathing
Seems like in hunger
For partner

I peep on you
When you say
You don’t love me
I saw your beautiful face
As horny
As your squirrel


Comments about I Peep On You by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • Ms Presumptuous (12/22/2019 12:47:00 AM)

    Well she too peeped on you!(Report)Reply

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  • Raymichelle Springer (1/25/2009 5:59:00 PM)

    This one was good.i have one question though what were you thinking when u wrote this. You have me curious about what you think about when you write your poems Sulaiman......(Report)Reply

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  • Cassie Wheathers (1/23/2009 6:55:00 PM)

    wow. i love it...but im suprised the site didnt remove it, they can be sensitive sometimes.(Report)Reply

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  • Rayjean Carter (1/19/2009 12:42:00 AM)

    this poem is...interesting...i get the feeling of 'desire to know wat you don't' from this poem....good imagination(Report)Reply

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  • Vijay Gupta (1/18/2009 10:33:00 AM)

    good imagination i like it.(Report)Reply

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  • Onelia Avelar (1/15/2009 4:19:00 AM)

    :) It's very emotional fit of temper, I think beyond the word peep is 'piss' in a more barbarian version :) , but the poem is vigorous and brings some strange relief from pain or from some continence.
    Best wishes,
    one(Report)Reply

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  • Ken E Hall (1/15/2009 1:57:00 AM)

    Hi what a cute healthy poem so so original and quite funny but very clever,
    I think Mick Jagger could sing this one ' I can't get no da da da da'
    kind regards(Report)Reply

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  • Khadijah Tate (1/14/2009 7:17:00 AM)

    Y0u DiD A Very GOOd i LiKE THiS POEm iTs KuTE!(Report)Reply

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  • Melvina GermainMelvina Germain (1/14/2009 6:22:00 AM)

    I Peep on You, love the title, reminds me of something that happened to 3 or 4 of us playing in the back yard as children, you know the you show me yours and I'll show you mine, that was the first thing that came to mind. Of course this poem is hot like the firery clutches of lust, you know what the peeper sees and what's about to happen with all that moisture about, especially in the squirrel area. I love the way you write, the just get right down to it approach, and that's what keeps me coming back.(Report)Reply

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  • Aijaz Asif (1/14/2009 6:08:00 AM)

    nice peep: p.... :)
    only you know how to change the mood of poem and put smile on readers lips, i loved it thanks for sharing 10's peeps for this beautiful write
    rgds
    asif(Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (1/13/2009 8:25:00 AM)

    THIS IS A GREAT PEEP!
    10++(Report)Reply

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  • Min Sia (1/12/2009 5:45:00 AM)

    The instincts..the intuitions of a heart inlove..fully expressed through bodies..no words ever needed...

    Truly..expressive words...

    Thanks for sharing...Great piece!(Report)Reply

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  • sumaira .....ir (1/11/2009 5:33:00 AM)

    U have a great sence of judgement than: -) ... nice and beautiful words...(Report)Reply

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  • Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (1/11/2009 1:21:00 AM)

    interesting piece.....the body expresses more than words-10(Report)Reply

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  • Lal Hauzel (1/10/2009 3:50:00 AM)

    Good...Better still if u can let the words (or the poem as a whole) rhyme.


    Keep it up!(Report)Reply

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (1/9/2009 9:18:00 AM)

    The way you explore the boundries bro, never fails to amaze....you are a true poet of genius qualities.....and it's always a pleasure to read your work.

    Keep bouncing them out bro....you're a first class writer, of the highest form.

    Thanks for this.....Your brother

    Jon(Report)Reply

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  • Arquavia Pryor (1/7/2009 9:32:00 PM)

    lol yea its gud i lyke it bt it tells me dat u is probably a freak but i hope u not lyke dat but kool poem once again(Report)Reply

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  • ~*~(\ /) ~*~Payyton: DrowningSorrow~*~(\ /) ~*~ (1/7/2009 8:04:00 PM)

    hahahahhaha...I laughed......Good one! !

    <33Payyton(Report)Reply

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  • Drascilla Chihope (1/7/2009 5:37:00 AM)

    hey i liked your poem ya bt at the other hand it makes me think u a kinda dirty, soz if this is offending you(Report)Reply

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  • J Marsters (1/6/2009 10:43:00 AM)

    Very very interesting. Witty(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 2, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, February 2, 2009