I Peep On You Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

I Peep On You

Rating: 3.9


I peep on you
When you say
You don’t love me
I saw your rose pulps

I peep on you
I saw you rested your love
On the bowl

I peep on you
I saw your barbaric tits waving
Water dripping from there
Right to your squirrel

I peep on you
I saw your squirrel
Wet but breathing
Seems like in hunger
For partner

I peep on you
When you say
You don’t love me
I saw your beautiful face
As horny
As your squirrel

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 15 January 2009

Hi what a cute healthy poem so so original and quite funny but very clever, I think Mick Jagger could sing this one ' I can't get no da da da da' kind regards

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Khadijah Tate 14 January 2009

Y0u DiD A Very GOOd i LiKE THiS POEm iTs KuTE!

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Aijaz Asif 14 January 2009

nice peep: p.... :) only you know how to change the mood of poem and put smile on readers lips, i loved it thanks for sharing 10's peeps for this beautiful write rgds asif

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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 January 2009

THIS IS A GREAT PEEP! 10++

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Min Sia 12 January 2009

The instincts..the intuitions of a heart inlove..fully expressed through bodies..no words ever needed... Truly..expressive words... Thanks for sharing...Great piece!

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Ms Presumptuous 22 December 2019

Well she too peeped on you!

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Raymichelle Springer 25 January 2009

This one was good.i have one question though what were you thinking when u wrote this. You have me curious about what you think about when you write your poems Sulaiman......

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Cassie Wheathers 23 January 2009

wow. i love it...but im suprised the site didnt remove it, they can be sensitive sometimes.

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Rayjean Carter 19 January 2009

this poem is...interesting...i get the feeling of 'desire to know wat you don't' from this poem....good imagination

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Vijay Gupta 18 January 2009

good imagination i like it.

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