Caressing Your Eyes Poem by mark nwagwu

Caressing Your Eyes

Rating: 4.8

You reach for your pot
and scoop out a story
with memories so hot
it burns with fury

I run to my soul
and call up the word
that speaks to your face
caressing your eyes

You can't wash it off
though words don't stick
they have a life
in your liquid eyes

Thad Wilk 08 May 2008

An eloquent write Mark! Delightful insight, a pleasure indeed to read! ! *10*! ! Best regards! Friend Thad

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Jurietta Duraan 11 April 2008

I am returning your compliment! ! ! This poem has beautiful imagery... and also the theme of words of course!

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Usha Pisharody 06 April 2008

Very very evocative poem! Really a good one!

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Coreena Dejesus 08 March 2008

oh i like this, i agree with Vidyadhar words are etched in the mind, and stick with you. This is a fantastic write, thank you so much for sharing. **HUGZ** CC

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 March 2008

Words can not be washed becuse they are etched in mind..........very well written.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 25 April 2010

Like stories that eyes tell Conversely, stories where eyes never lie. Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Malini Kadir 13 December 2008

Wow! this really touches the eyes! ! ! ! !

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Reshma Ramesh 11 November 2008

sir.....if i found someone who could write to me like would be too good to be are beyond the best sir.......this is a master piece...

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Chris Mendros 18 August 2008

Commentary can only weaken this creative masterwork, but i felt compelled to comment just to let you know that. This is both intellectually and viscerally strong, and the rhymes make it memorable. Not many guys talking about their lady's eyes these days.

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Lynda Robson 23 July 2008

Great title and lovely imagery in this bewitching write, it was a pleasure to read, thanks 10 from me, Lynda xx

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Obetiti Nguru Nigeria
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