I take relief of you being here
you're my light no matter where
without hatred and hesitation
I'll run to wish-granting dream
become lightened by the white eyes
the waves washed away your sad story
even if the world turns betray the dove's prayers
I shall polish to shine the innocent chances
anyway I can still tighten this loose stanza
(dedicated to a great poet, Mr.Amiri Baraka)
wonderful dedication and fabulous words written....great write!
The presence of loved one certainly gives relief as narrated in this poem.
metaphors made the poem very delectable for the readers to read......well done ahmad...10
weel done as ausual, is a pleasure to read your poems...
yeah, sometimes we need aspirin or any pain killer for a confused mind. Well done...cheers
when you are inspired, it sets your heart on fire. good write and dedication
i really enjoy tht u write poems for others amazing job 10+ kept it up
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is so nice..i guess, he/she will be happy for this tribute...cheers..