lady grace


I Will Not Forget You...A Valentine Piece - Poem by lady grace

i haven’t seen you in the blue sky nor notice you at the golden rays, I even talk to the rain and ask them where you go...in the valleys, no other place to wait, ... in the mountain I usually play, ... in the jungle I finally rest..

Raging waters I heard from the mountain down to the stream, it took me a time to spend waiting til you come, til you see me crying over the promise that was made, hoping that one day I’ll see you in the pedestal of your success...

the sky continues shining, dry the flooding slopes and stops the flowing mud...roots give up and clings to the bough, leaves are swaying to the music of birds, to the tune of the chirping creatures...

i will never forget you even if they take my memory.. the face which is always invisible to me is the picture I framed in the mirror of my reflection, ..is the portrait of adonis whose heart is as warm as paris and as strong as atlas....

i did many times crying above the rolling waves to see you over the bubbling tides, but you were not there... you were not there…I went up and ride on the clouds and ask them why do they fall unto the earth but my questions are unanswered, still you are not there…from the bottom of my heart to the inner core of the earth, GOD knows, God knows how I miss u... the pointed blades which grow in my mind, the strings that bind roots to roots, the withered pigments that floats...a confession

let the heaven touch the earth and bless the grass of morning dew...let the sky swallow the sound of words that has been misunderstood in the distance where you and I meet in the pages where truths and lies are revealed..

Open your hearts to rainbow of tears
As you open your mind to many fears
the picture of fulfillment is in your face
I miss you truly please be here…

how can I say all these words where I know it is unbelievable to you? ...


Comments about I Will Not Forget You...A Valentine Piece by lady grace

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (2/11/2010 10:13:00 PM)


    Your soul is like the river flows right to the enormous Ocean.A splendid creature! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (2/2/2010 3:06:00 PM)


    Open your hearts to rainbow of tears
    As you open your mind to many fears
    the picture of fulfillment is in your face
    I miss you truly please be here.............................
    page seems doused by rain
    as heart reneged by tears
    yet beauty emblazons heart
    still mirror loses grace of love by void, wonderful write through amazing imagery and metaphors flowing though ingenuity, yet of unique genre,10+++++, thanks for sharing
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  • (2/2/2010 7:49:00 AM)


    I enjoyed this poem, the way you weaved the different parts of nature with your feelings and thoughts. You have certainly poured out your feelings with this one. Ben (Report) Reply

  • (2/2/2010 5:19:00 AM)


    Very flowing poem for Valentines... the last line makes it into an unrequited love you have a feel for this poem hope its not you
    thanks for the read
    regards
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  • John Knight (2/1/2010 3:56:00 PM)


    Hi Lady G - I like this poem - it reminds us of the transience of Valentine Messeges. We come and go through peoples lives and poeple come and go through ours - sometimes the impact is greater and we send a Valentine Card in 2000 but not in 2001 and never again or maybe this year ? ? I love the ending.

    Open your hearts to rainbow of tears
    As you open your mind to many fears
    The picture of fulfillment is in your face
    I miss you truely - be here! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

    We all need each otehr in this World Lady G but in PH we can be there for each other Love in Poetry - JOHN
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  • (2/1/2010 5:11:00 AM)


    nice!
    i love 8!

    hihihihiihiihihihi

    Make oder poem as good as what you published
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  • (2/1/2010 5:03:00 AM)


    Very poetic,
    Excellent,
    And beautifully express
    Well done
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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 1, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 21, 2010


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