Monday, December 15, 2008

If I Knew Someone Cared Comments

Rating: 4.6

If I knew someone cared.
If I knew someone loved.
I would be able to
Handle without
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Nicole Rawls
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Akhtar Jawad 25 October 2014

I care about Your thought, I care how you feel. Why can’t I allow my Pain to heal? A picture of selfless true love.

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Lenny Camacho 25 October 2014

allow it Nicole... let it heal by writing more precious words that stick together in poetry

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 October 2014

Beautiful poem with fantastic lines...... Why can’t I allow my Pain to heal? That's the beautiful thoughts you have expressed well. If we can allow pain to heal by ourselves then this shows one is courageous enough to handle all pains. I loved the way you presented. Thanks for sharing with us. Congrats for this poem being the poem of the day! ! !

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Leslie Philibert 25 October 2014

Like this. I would though put thought in the plural, and the main verb in the second verse in the conjunctive, were pretty, were kind. A good poem!

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Lyn Paul 25 October 2014

Great Poem of the day Nicole and by these words I can tell that you have a huge heart. Thank you

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 25 October 2014

Why can’t I allow my Pain to heal? one who care about other can't allow his own wound to heal'' He knows the enjoyment of pain nice one

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Liliana ~el 25 October 2013

Deep wounds; pressure

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Tristan Love-day 25 October 2013

: O *rates* wow, luv it *.*

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Jasbir Chatterjee 25 October 2013

nice poem, Nicole...you must first learn to love yourself for what you are...take pride in what you are and the whole world will love you...

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Akanksha Bhatt 25 October 2012

really its very touching...! i liked it very much..!

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Mark Dillon 25 October 2012

Great write with great feeling, you have friends who care for you, reach out.

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i know that someone cares and thats why i will continue suffering with courage

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blank blank 25 October 2012

i know that someone cares and thats why i will continue suffering with courage

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Enebeli Ifeanyi 25 October 2012

if i knew someone cared i wud walk tru d night not afraid of the dark

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Clarissa Tobey 29 January 2010

I care Nicole I also miss you oh so much and the life we had...

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Dakotah French 07 July 2009

I care about you and always will because ur amazing in ur own way and i love it and im actully im looking at you in class rite now and ur sooo cue ooking at that civics book

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Muriel Emerson 27 May 2009

i love you and care with all my heart i miss you like crazy and i too haven't been doing too hot.........write to me asap and tell kassie too i love you both please dont do anything stupid i can't lose another friend

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deep down we all want to feel wanted and needed, as someone once said to me a heart in pain is a heart that will love again, take care, nice poem :)

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