Ravi Sathasivam


If I Were....... - Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

If I were the sun, I would brighten up your day
make your dream come true like a sun shine
and you will live with happiness for ever

If I were the moon, I would sail along with you
Bring you the garland made of stars
and you will feel your love never be sad

If I were the wind, I would blow you a kiss
Bring you romantic love in your heart
and you will free to hold me tight without shyness

If I were the rain, I would wash your sorrow
Bring you happiness that shower like waterfalls
and you will see your tears vanish for ever

If I were the cold, I would touch you gently
Bring you loving breeze to hold me closely
and you will see my love for you is greatly

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathaivam


Comments about If I Were....... by Ravi Sathasivam

  • (12/9/2009 7:15:00 AM)


    very nice and lovely poem. thanks alot for sharing. i relly enjoyed this poem full of wishes and meanings. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/7/2009 12:06:00 AM)


    wow awesome poem of wishes to someone who is very much special....10+++++++++++ i hope i would be able to make a sequel of this piece....Thanks! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2009 5:53:00 AM)


    A poetic love letter beautifully expressed.
    You are a romantic to the depths of
    your soul. Very touching.

    As always,

    Sandra
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  • (12/5/2009 12:25:00 PM)


    Very very nicely written and for sure most of us feel the same very well expressed (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 11:37:00 AM)


    lovely tercets with different metaphors! you represented your self in different shapes and that gave you the space to invent metaphors widely and to express your love better.it's wonderful...great work! (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 6:14:00 AM)


    What a stunning metaphors! !
    Great Job...++10++
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  • (12/5/2009 5:14:00 AM)


    a metaphorical write...expressing love and care through the healing powers of mother nature! (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 5:03:00 AM)


    Beautiful love poem....... expressing your love in such a poetic way; with similes, lovely three lines stanzas, simple and well connected........ (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 3:57:00 AM)


    nicely done....expressive...

    if i were you
    i would rather say ''i love you'' directly..
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  • (12/5/2009 2:40:00 AM)


    its like a little song, nice poem (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 1:12:00 AM)


    Well written poem
    Well express....
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 12:02:00 AM)


    wow...what a nice poem here my friend...i love the simplicity yet sweet and meaningful verses entwined here.............10+++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Meggie Gultiano (12/4/2009 11:20:00 PM)


    If I were the cold, I would touch you gently
    Bring you loving breeze to hold me closely
    and you will see my love for you is greatly
    ..................................
    woww, you did a good job here, Ravi..great write
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 4, 2009



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