If I were the sun, I would brighten up your day
make your dream come true like a sun shine
and you will live with happiness for ever
If I were the moon, I would sail along with you
Bring you the garland made of stars
and you will feel your love never be sad
If I were the wind, I would blow you a kiss
Bring you romantic love in your heart
and you will free to hold me tight without shyness
If I were the rain, I would wash your sorrow
Bring you happiness that shower like waterfalls
and you will see your tears vanish for ever
If I were the cold, I would touch you gently
Bring you loving breeze to hold me closely
and you will see my love for you is greatly
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathaivam
a metaphorical write...expressing love and care through the healing powers of mother nature!
If I were the cold, I would touch you gently Bring you loving breeze to hold me closely and you will see my love for you is greatly .................................. woww, you did a good job here, Ravi..great write
wow...what a nice poem here my friend...i love the simplicity yet sweet and meaningful verses entwined here.............10+++++++
very nice and lovely poem. thanks alot for sharing. i relly enjoyed this poem full of wishes and meanings.
wow awesome poem of wishes to someone who is very much special....10+++++++++++ i hope i would be able to make a sequel of this piece....Thanks! ! !
A poetic love letter beautifully expressed. You are a romantic to the depths of your soul. Very touching. As always, Sandra
Very very nicely written and for sure most of us feel the same very well expressed
lovely tercets with different metaphors! you represented your self in different shapes and that gave you the space to invent metaphors widely and to express your love better.it's wonderful...great work!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful love poem....... expressing your love in such a poetic way; with similes, lovely three lines stanzas, simple and well connected........