if i could only paint the stars
i'll paint them like a necklace...
if i could only paint the seeds
i'll paint them like an old oak tree..
if only i could paint bubbles
i'll paint them like thousands of pearls...
nice flow here daydreaming for abstract goals is great exercise for the spirit
If only I could be there, I'd decorate your neck with a pink necklace made of glittering stars, and held together by a thread of angel hair. A sweet, short poem of class. H
Dear Lady Grace If only I could tell you how nice this is There would not be enough time in the world
a beautiful little write....if only i could.....i like it :) ....so many things we wish we could do....things we could be.......very well done.....i like the form too!
only i could paint bubbles in the ocean i'd paint them like thousands of pearls...i wish if i could paint you as angel from heaven on earth.. so many things i could hvae done for you... beautiful poem with honest imagination./....i loved it...10
You just painted them all perfectly in my mind while reading your poem
Carnival of words, well chosen...every time I read your piece it looks like fireworks in the sky spreading like diamonds within my vision. It tickles my heart and cools down my blood pressure and sugar level.Your piece therefore is like a medication or a cure for an aching soul. Thanks Lady.
Being able to write about it, makes it so you almost can! Deborah Cromer
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
If I could only see those pearls around your neck, and watch you paint those stars! very nice Images. keep them coming. I enjoy them 10+++