If Only I Could Poem by lady grace

If Only I Could

Rating: 4.8


if i could only paint the stars
i'll paint them like a necklace...

if i could only paint the seeds
i'll paint them like an old oak tree..

if only i could paint bubbles
i'll paint them like thousands of pearls...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Kern 11 July 2009

If I could only see those pearls around your neck, and watch you paint those stars! very nice Images. keep them coming. I enjoy them 10+++

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Lee Crowell 11 July 2009

nice flow here daydreaming for abstract goals is great exercise for the spirit

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Herbert Nehrlich2 11 July 2009

If only I could be there, I'd decorate your neck with a pink necklace made of glittering stars, and held together by a thread of angel hair. A sweet, short poem of class. H

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The Dreamer 11 July 2009

Dear Lady Grace If only I could tell you how nice this is There would not be enough time in the world

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Angelic Warrior 11 July 2009

a beautiful little write....if only i could.....i like it :) ....so many things we wish we could do....things we could be.......very well done.....i like the form too!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2009

only i could paint bubbles in the ocean i'd paint them like thousands of pearls...i wish if i could paint you as angel from heaven on earth.. so many things i could hvae done for you... beautiful poem with honest imagination./....i loved it...10

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Sam Edison 13 July 2009

You just painted them all perfectly in my mind while reading your poem

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Ben Gieske 12 July 2009

Full of imager and wonderful activity. Very delightful.

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Noel Horlanda 12 July 2009

Carnival of words, well chosen...every time I read your piece it looks like fireworks in the sky spreading like diamonds within my vision. It tickles my heart and cools down my blood pressure and sugar level.Your piece therefore is like a medication or a cure for an aching soul. Thanks Lady.

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Deborah Cromer 11 July 2009

Being able to write about it, makes it so you almost can! Deborah Cromer

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