Eyes that look inside.
Ears that speak out music.
Feelings that never surface.
Hair that grows inward.
A sun that turns dark.
The empty glass -upside down.
Songs without words.
Babies that never cry.
Paint without colors.
A room overfilled.
Green slim ice-cream.
Walks without steps.
Hearts empty of love.
Money that is never spent.
Empty bottle of lost DREAMS
Oh very nicely done.... What good are arms outstretched but cannot feel..? ! ? I loved this piece.. May the illusions speak louder than words.. Wendy
One of my earlier catch phrases was 'In essence dreams are real'.It really applies to this poem.Good strong composition.
enjoyed reading this...i see things that are not there but seemed to be there and never there..but your words paint the picture how things could be if they were real..excellent write..
Metaphor gallery and galore …wonderful reading pleasure Sir 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK
Illusions that indicate a complete feeling of emptiness.....Great write Joe...10
Wonderful wonderful illusions. Wonderful perception of emptiness. Thanks for your comment on my Swedish Immigrant. Karin Anderson
whoa.......this is the best thing i have read today......well penned sir
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
We can add on like this An ocean without water. A man without brain. A woman without heart. A food without taste. All these illusions are like eyes without visions. I like this poem very much.