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Tuesday, September 12, 2006

I Want Water

Rating: 5.0
Just dont taste good.
Whats wrong-number one water.
So the rice grower, ' said'.
You maybe want more.
Feel like a shut door.
Water just dont feel right.
Acid-rain- blurring my sight.
Number one water-BOY.
Please dont tell me more.
YOU MUST HAVE WATER.
YOU number -1,1,1,1, -wont live.
Water shock to the body.
Water just dont feel right.
Must have some water, water.
WHAT YOU MEAN-YOU WANT -WATER.
Out on the block -GIRL.
BABY NEEDS WATER.
YOE, YOE, YOE-you got-WATER
MAN-KEEP YOUR COOL.
YOE-COOL water MAN.
COOL WATER
WATER.
WAT.
W.
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COMMENTS
Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 18 December 2009
A poem floating on the deep waters of life and poetry.
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Ben Gieske 30 October 2008
I like your diversity with this one, using various techniques (1,1,1, - capitals, [[[ ]]]) . You paint the scene and successfully relate the action of this one-act play. I can hear the voices and see the gestures. Keep experimenting.
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Janri Gogeshvili 11 September 2008
Interestingly … poetic «hydro-therapeutics» …! Thanks/
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 04 September 2008
water is life...................and from life.......we live!
1 0 Reply
Vijay Gupta 22 August 2008
Water is life. Poem is good. Thanks...............
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David Desantis 21 May 2008
You sure water's what they are wanting haha? ? Nice dude
1 0 Reply
i love water festival...songkran in thailand. good write poewhit
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Duncan Wyllie 16 May 2008
An interesting write that can be open to interpretation All the best Love duncan X
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June Smithster 15 May 2008
eye grok finding water in the frogs
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Drake Deaton 08 November 2007
Once again you amaze me with such bottomless stupidity....bravo
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