GREENWOLFE 1962

Rookie (MARCH 23, 1951)

Imagined Love - Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

You can find imagined love
Right there between the lines.
It's surely there, the love we see,
The one our heart designs.

It still emerges vaguely,
Until you give it life.
It's only then, when flourishing,
It causes pain and strife.

You never can return it.
Nor can it be replaced.
It seems to disappear at once,
With both blind souls disgraced.

I do not choose to give you
Another soul's torment.
So I'll just ask you kindly dear,
Don't change the words I meant.

They are not written vaguely.
Nor can I thus conceive,
Of how you can imagine them;
The things, you now believe.

So, just remember truly,
Though it's the one you see;
Don't focus on imagined love,
The only love from me.


Comments about Imagined Love by GREENWOLFE 1962

  • (6/3/2009 9:29:00 PM)


    nicely creative, very brilliant write. always ieaves me touched and intrigued. (Report) Reply

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  • (2/24/2009 4:52:00 PM)


    Once again... greatly written! I enjoy reading your poems. (Report) Reply

  • (2/9/2009 4:38:00 PM)


    very beautiful and i loved it romantic touch of a well seasoned love relationship (Report) Reply

  • (2/7/2009 8:03:00 PM)


    Nice flow, lovely poem.. I love it... it really got me realaxed.. and the use of words.. unique.

    best wishes,
    ana
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  • (1/28/2009 7:43:00 PM)


    Every word means so much here. I would dare compare you to Poe-my favorite poet- because each verse flows into the next. I could use this to describe my life and that's why I appreciate it enough to compare you to Poe. My mother says, 'Poems can come from the mind, but works of art come from the heart'. And that is what your poem is, a work of art. (Report) Reply

  • (1/19/2009 11:11:00 PM)


    mr 1962 your poems just get better with time.... (Report) Reply

  • (10/1/2008 4:41:00 PM)


    the flow in this poem made it easy to read, but the depth in it is unspeakable. (Report) Reply

  • (9/12/2008 5:54:00 PM)


    So many people get caught in this trap. I think it is the nature of poetry to pull on heartstrings, we just need to keep our heads on straight.
    Take care, and Thank you for reading my poetry, I'll be back soon to read more of yours.
    Catie :)
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  • (9/10/2008 1:54:00 AM)


    Written wonderfully, the last stanza is so sincere and true. Your an amazing poet indeed. (Report) Reply

  • (9/5/2008 6:12:00 PM)


    Great one.. You write a wonderful poems about love... no thing more to tell but really great thanks a lot (Report) Reply

  • (9/2/2008 7:08:00 PM)


    your right...you can never change love......you are still my inspration in writing poems....i just wanna tell you something...me being 18 yrs old and writing poems about love and all that stuff, well i can tell you that you beat me in that subject.....whenever i read your poems..i wanna write more and more about love....thank you so much
    w/love
    krystal
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  • (9/1/2008 8:37:00 PM)


    this is a lovely poem, it flows so nicely.

    also thank you for reading my poems.

    much thanks.
    -aryn
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  • (8/31/2008 9:12:00 AM)


    a very good poem, send some of your creations at my home address for review (Report) Reply

  • (8/27/2008 12:27:00 PM)


    this poem is awsome dad...... (Report) Reply

  • (8/23/2008 6:53:00 PM)


    waaaaaaaaaaw
    to find imagined love is what most people are deaming for
    (Report) Reply

  • (8/11/2008 1:32:00 PM)


    Very good. Reminds me of a mistake I made once... (Report) Reply

  • Mitta Xinindlu (7/20/2008 10:27:00 PM)


    Ha! I'm out of words. I just don't know hor to praise this one. It's beauty starts from the titles right though to the last sentence. Beautiful.keep writing (Report) Reply

  • (7/14/2008 3:54:00 AM)


    imagined love...prisoner of love...that is me Greenwolf...and I just can't disagree with you...'until we give it a life'...wow. (Report) Reply

  • Vidyadhar Durgekar (7/10/2008 9:56:00 AM)


    This is cool imaginative poem, nice to read. (Report) Reply

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (7/9/2008 1:06:00 PM)


    Finely written no doubt.....thoughtfull composition.
    10/10
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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 30, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, April 12, 2010


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