Show me beautiful colors
to fill up this sky
send me away from "what ifs"
so I don't have to cry
do I go left or do I go right
no longer is relief in sight
remedies are few
should I give up on you?
running and closing my eyes
oh let me see truth, not lies! ! !
who is the victim here?
why must I live in fear?
the impending doom does loom
in every breath I take
how much longer can I go on
how much unhappiness can I take
Lion & Tigress Series
Copyright @ Aqua Flower
(cont.) GLOOMY IS AS GLOOMY DOES When gloomy is how your day starts out, simply open your windows and boldly shout: I'm not takin' it anymore! Let me correct the score. Mr. Day, GIVE me sunshine and puffy white clouds. Don't, with gloom wrap me in funeral shrouds! ! I'm not ready to end my life like that! No Siree! I swear to not give into gloom; I'm too mature. Get out of my way, Gloom. Happy I'll be! ! ! ...bri :) [now, SMILE! ]
Thanks Bri! ! ! Gloom creeps kn the room but I do eventually kick it out! ! !
i detect notes of despair and fear. am i correct/right? to MyPoemList (the gloomy-poems one) . i like how you 'mixed up' your rhyme scheme(s) ! ! nice. let me know if you get into a funk. maybe i can help? ! (cont.) ...
When we see a gloomy sky the clouds always lift to show the way.+++10 Robert
Even on the gloomiest day, your comments are always so positive and welcomed!
A good start with a nice poem, Rainbow. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Should i give up on you? ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.