Imprisoned Poem by Aqua Flower

Imprisoned

Rating: 4.5


In the quiet of the night
when it is very late
She hears her lover calling
like a cricket calling his mate

Here I am my love, come to me
in my arms, I will love you tenderly
I will wrap your lace in my arms of leather
and lift your spirits like no other

She puts her heart wings on
so she can fly fast
she soars through the air
the spell has been cast

In the distance
she see the script of her desire
she longs for her love
and his flames of fire

she dances on hot coals
elated and free
she falls in a deep hole
imprisoned
it's where she wants to be

Copyright @ Aqua Flower
Lion and Tigress series
2020

Monday, September 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,love,passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 10 October 2020

" I will wrap your lace in my arms of leather" Is that human-speak or cricket-speak? verb sear: " to burn the surface of something with extreme heat" ? This poem is somewhat lost on me. :) bri

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Aqua Flower 12 October 2020

Thank you for the proofread. I changed sear to soar. my mistake. As far as the lace and leather...that was my favorite line. It expresses the stark difference between materials somewhat strong and someone delicate. This indicates how the lovers are to each other. " Lost on you.....? I hope you find it...lol

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Khairul Ahsan 10 October 2020

Love poems like this flow naturally from your pen. The poem epitomizes passion.

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Aqua Flower 12 October 2020

You always get my love poems. I'm glad you liked it. I enjoyed reading it again. Bri pointed out Sear was indeed incorrect.. It was suppose to read soar. I think it reads much better now...thank you Bri!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 07 September 2020

Nice poem. Nice imagery and metaphors.

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M Asim Nehal 07 September 2020

A very sensual and passionate poem. Nicely written finally she reached where she wanted to be, Great Loved it.10++++++

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