In A Swing Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

In A Swing

Rating: 5.0


Sitting in swing
I watch the earth
Going up and coming
Down so swiftly

The sky moves
Overhead as if it
Would hit my head

And I feel the air
In every pores of
My body as whirlwind

Closing my eyes
I feel life can't be better

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 16 May 2022

These small things add flavor to our life. Nicely conceived poem.

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Sandra Feldman 15 May 2022

I can still remember that feeling, too. So wonderfully and vividly, expressed here too. Very original and pleasing piece.

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 May 2022

Memory from childhood days. Gratitude.

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Wonderful to sit in a swing. It feels so surreal. Like Poetess Sandra, i too can feel the joy of swing in my childhood days

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Anil ji so beautifully written......10

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Swinging in a swing is a divine experience. Expressed so hearteningly. Top score

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Ruta Mohapatra 17 May 2022

I know that feeling...exhilarating!

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Nabakishore Dash 16 May 2022

A very nice memory from your childhood is nicely described through pen Dear poet Panda.

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Richard Wlodarski 16 May 2022

Poet Panda, thank you for stirring some very happy memories from childhood. And adulthood! You're never too old to swing!

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