Sitting in swing
I watch the earth
Going up and coming
Down so swiftly
The sky moves
Overhead as if it
Would hit my head
And I feel the air
In every pores of
My body as whirlwind
Closing my eyes
I feel life can't be better
I can still remember that feeling, too. So wonderfully and vividly, expressed here too. Very original and pleasing piece.
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Wonderful to sit in a swing. It feels so surreal. Like Poetess Sandra, i too can feel the joy of swing in my childhood days
My body as whirlwind......beautiful.....thank u, dear Poet....
Swinging in a swing is a divine experience. Expressed so hearteningly. Top score
A very nice memory from your childhood is nicely described through pen Dear poet Panda.
Poet Panda, thank you for stirring some very happy memories from childhood. And adulthood! You're never too old to swing!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
These small things add flavor to our life. Nicely conceived poem.