Valsa George

Inaudible Language - Poem by Valsa George

There is
an invisible connect,
two hearts in love.
wonders out of the blue
of which
others have no clue,
Making the presence
Rendering everything
from others
Hardly perceived
by anyone
Rarely identified!

an inaudible language
speaks it aloud,
the language
of the eyes
the language
of the heart

A glitter
in the cornea
A flutter
of the eyelid
An accelerated
making the heart
high and low
If observed intent!

Comments about Inaudible Language by Valsa George

  • (11/25/2014 12:20:00 PM)

    Silence and symbols speak louder than words when love surfaces between two hearts.....Valsa.......this is
    definitely an amazing piece penned wonderfully.........10/10
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  • Heather Wilkins (8/3/2013 12:41:00 PM)

    a lovely write two in love need not speak the heart will speak for you nice thought (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (7/28/2013 6:27:00 PM)

    Action speaks louder than words. A lovely smile or even a tender touch
    shows a love so beautiful and tender. Love that shows so everybody
    knows. Very good.
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  • Ramesh Rai (7/28/2013 4:35:00 AM)

    so far my exprrience count language of love is more audible n can b read easily. you may please visit my page.LANGUAGE OF LOVE. (Report) Reply

  • (7/27/2013 10:01:00 AM)

    love spread its ripples on the shore of...

    the language
    of the eyes
    the language
    of the heart
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  • (7/24/2013 8:39:00 AM)

    This quiet language of love speaks louder than words. It's a real pleasure to read this lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (7/22/2013 10:02:00 AM)

    A well elucidated poem.I love it. Let me quote Kumaran Assan, Melokke pulakamarnniduma yuvavu yen /Charathu koodi nadakolkil randu perkkum / kalangu mingum idarum hrudayam thudikkum / bhalam viyarkkum oru minnalakathu payum This is the tension of love. Or beloved will stand like Sakuntala as if thorn struck her heel looking back to see the lover passed by. This is a very picturesque poem. I give 10 (Report) Reply

  • Soulful Heart (7/19/2013 3:07:00 AM)

    intri cacies of love indeed r mysterious..... words woven as sequins into the silky feelings.... (Report) Reply

  • Somanathan Iyer (7/18/2013 4:05:00 AM)

    an excellent write. silence speaks many a words. nice to read. (Report) Reply

  • (7/17/2013 3:50:00 PM)

    Sweet! Thanks for sharing this one, it is a beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (7/17/2013 3:06:00 AM)

    Light, and logical for its subject, you carried forward John Donne's point about the language the souls speak in bonding..reference to poem Extasie...! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (7/16/2013 12:59:00 PM)

    The language of love is often silent - expressed beautifully here Valsa, a lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (7/16/2013 12:52:00 PM)

    Extremely Beautiful..I loved reading it....Well said...Inaudible language expressed in audible way.
    Thank you for sharing with us.
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  • Geetha Jayakumar (7/16/2013 12:48:00 PM)

    Extremely Beautiful..I loved reading it....Well said...Inaudible language expressed in audible way.
    Thank you for sharing with us.
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  • Dinesh Nair (7/16/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    Love breeds love and so this language is perfectly visible, I feel.
    A poem that falls into our minds like a silk thread to tie a new knot of love again..
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  • (7/16/2013 1:53:00 AM)

    The invisible connect making the presence magnetic and every thing electric with the inaudible language of the eyes, the language of the heart with a glitter in the cornea and the flutter of the eyelid accelerating the rhythm of the heart- -I'm repeating your poem, I suppose- -are beautiful words describing the love messages is fitting

    Inaudible language is made audible in your exemplary poem so fitting, Valsa!
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  • (7/15/2013 3:08:00 PM)

    An eloquent and gentle set of observations in this fine write and wonderfully crafted poem. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (7/15/2013 9:56:00 AM)

    Message of the eye is very deep indeed. Beautiful poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Kavya . (7/15/2013 5:39:00 AM)

    the language of love can be understood only if the other person is also in love.........a v gud write (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (7/15/2013 5:27:00 AM)

    We all make love first with our eyes and hope that love is returned in the eyes of others. A lovely poem Valsa. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, July 15, 2013

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