Source Invisible,
I bow before life.
It is spontaneous reverence
before the sacredness of life.
I want to touch being itself.
It is spontaneous desire.
I wonder at the sacredness of being.
My awareness of my being
is like bubbles at a spring
throbbing up from the bottom.
Did you see – the source is invisible
transcendent and infinitely abundant.
Ur poem make me now meet with invisible feeling from invisible source..so i just noticed, taste of the invisible sources is visible by special senses...There are a lot of invisible feelings and can be perceived from invisible sources. What a great thing, these invisible sources has a root source from another invisible source, that we call God..nice poem, can u see how it teaches me? no! because learning from this sweet poem is one of invisible source :) dont be confuse with my comment
We’re but spark of Wisdomful Fire [WF] …so all the attributes of WF will stay in packed and compact in miniscule mode …waiting for ‘Manifestation’ …and to get merged in Luminescent WF …= Realization…[Veda] thanks Sir for such a wonderful/insightful poetry Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
I like your poem, admire a comparison you used in it: 'My awareness of my being is like bubbles at a spring throbbing up from the bottom.' Thank yoi for sharing :)
Oh Doc...........You have the miraculous potions for many a man's illness............your lines are just splendid.............you have been in touch with god, have u? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? as if you have been with something intricate experience face to face, , , , , , , , , some life experience or some immortal truth or some eternal phenomenon or are you born with an inner soul with an excellent birth? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? I am just moved..............You have just silenced me.............the words are oh God, as if God has spelt them out from your heart.........thks, bi.
It is so deep and so tender. You succeeded in merging the world of duty with the world of dreams. Hats off!
So beautiful these words, soothing to the soul...Love this.....
Yes that can be seen when you close your eyes and meditate over the entire creation and we forget our existence of being.. Thank you so much for divine write.
I want to touch being itself. the source is invisible transcendent and infinitely abundant. it is very much philosophical and theological. There is mystical meaning in these lines. Sublime and elevated are these lines.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I was amazed by this poem. It really puts things into perspective, the kind of things I've been thinking about lately.