Is It A Trait Of Men? ? .. [men Upsetting Women (Wives) : Humor? ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Is It A Trait Of Men? ? .. [men Upsetting Women (Wives) : Humor? ]

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What have I done today....
to make my wife upset?
It wasn't very much,
but troubled she did get.
.... guess I have the knack
to make my Love's eyes wet.

I walked to the mailbox.
I moved a flower pot.
I trimmed my toenails, ....
and to do so, I did squat.

Yes, I have hurting hips, ....
but only now and then.
If I don't do chores NOW,
tell me, won't you, WHEN?
ok! Call my stubborn;
it is a trait of MEN.

NOW she serves me supper.
Are my sins forgiven?
The day was not so bad;
more trouble I have been in.
But SHE may think it "time" ……
time I end my sinnin'.

Thursday, July 11, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: gender
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
oh yeah. i almost forgot the 'story'. there is not much to say is



there? men are thoughtless, cruel, and difficult, if not impossible,


for women to rule completely.....no matter how hard the women try! i


have to be a MAN once in a while. so i may lift something heavier

than she thinks i should, or use body mechanics she thinks are
unhealthy. what? does she want me to live forever? ?

p.s. my PH friend John Westlake found a typo! : ( i had typed 'call my stubborn'. it should now be corrected to 'call me stubborn'!
OOPS! ! she is behind me reading this! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! OUCH! I'M SORRY DEAR. REALLY.


(Feb.2013)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yasmin Khan 11 July 2013

It's an honest appraisal of men.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 01 August 2013

This is fun. Yes men, and what they do are sometimes annoying. But since women love them they will be forgiven for as long as love is shared between them. Very nice poem.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 20 July 2013

love survives. The ending of the poem's story remembers me my events in past. That suddenly a person comes to you. Very well bri. Nice 1!

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David Wood 19 July 2013

Yes but love overcomes all

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Charles Darnell 14 July 2013

Watch you back, Bri....take it from one who knows....see, you don't need a wife to nag at you! :)

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Xelam Kan™ 12 July 2013

Hahahahahaha. Every man assume so dear but women will never surrender to this stance of Mr.Edwards. Your notes are quite informative,

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