Eyan Desir

. It's Over... (Funny)

You broke my heart
So many times
Was he sweeter?
Is he better?
Was the grass greener?
On the other side?
Wipe your eyes
Please don't cry
You meet a monster
Clever like Dracula
Please don't bother me
I am eating lobster
With my brother
I hate your sorry lines
And the stupid lies
Get another guy
My love bye, bye
Shut the door
I need time to recover
Sorry it's over


(LOL Dedicated to Nef)
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 2, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 10, 2009

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Comments about . It's Over... (Funny) by Eyan Desir

  • Tina Lio (3/19/2010 5:41:00 PM)

    great thought, keep up da good work...............it's over, hurt's alot but it okay be strong, there's a time u will not braek ur heart no more.there's r good memories nd bad memories u know it how life is......peace out! ! !

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  • Jessie Mar (7/1/2009 8:43:00 PM)

    OK! This one is difficult because when we hold someone as 'special' and they don't live up to our ideals of them, they break our hearts. There is a quote I like by Thomas Jefferson, 'Honesty is the first chapter in the book of Wisdom.' If everyone strived to be the best they can be to one another, less heartache. Deceit is poison to a relationship.

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  • lisa moore (6/30/2009 8:48:00 PM)

    aww i know how it feels to have ur heart broken: (

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  • Naidz Ladia (6/28/2009 12:57:00 AM)

    this is well presented..it's very impressive..tho this is nicely done ian, but the thought breaks my heart..i don't want the word 'goodbye' coz it means tears.hu pa mu ti? ...naizxenia..

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  • Nangula Immanuel (4/22/2009 5:10:00 PM)

    Hi Eyan!
    Another beautifully written piece. Well done! ! Saying it's over is easier said then done, but beautifully written none the less.

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (4/11/2009 12:10:00 AM)

    powerful bullet words...shot poetic at point blank! ...10

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  • Kranthi Pothineni (4/10/2009 10:49:00 PM)

    Its easy to say 'It's over'. You expressed your feeling very well and straight. Short and clean.

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  • Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/9/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    that's right u go do that nice write i can relate powerful and straight 2 the point nice

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  • Umbelina Linhares Pimenta Frota Bastos (4/7/2009 2:10:00 PM)

    Life works in this way. A love goes and soon another one comes.

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  • James MclainJames Mclain (4/6/2009 8:15:00 PM)

    Lets talk about the bright side here..people like that which
    you described you are not...it hurts we learn to flirt again..
    even by accident...iip

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  • Alex Hibbert (4/6/2009 8:00:00 PM)

    This is great.. I recently went through something similar so i know how it feels

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  • Samweli Butobi (4/6/2009 6:55:00 AM)

    sure it touches when the one you love leaves you and dates with the other mate.
    love has its own pillars and needs condusive situation to grow deep.

    When a lover has a lover he or never know who a good and the real lover is but when he or she has know someone around regrates and know who the best and real lover was.
    love shifts but true love never end.

    the sentences
    I hate your sorry lines
    And the stupid lies.
    this give how you are tired of her naggings.
    good work, whana read more.

    NB.Drop your comment on my poem 'deep in the soul or just on the bank. if you get a chance.
    I appriciate

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  • Lynda Robson (4/6/2009 6:47:00 AM)

    An angry write about a love that has ended in a bitter way, thanks
    10
    Lynda xx

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (4/6/2009 6:40:00 AM)

    substantial write of dislike..expressed well..nice rhymes...

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  • Hazem Al JaberHazem Al Jaber (4/6/2009 6:10:00 AM)

    it`s over, , don`t cry..
    it`s over, , but there is a chance..
    it`s over, , but its not the end of life..
    so amazing lovely sadly piece..
    thank you for sharing..
    hazem al..

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  • Sandra MartyresSandra Martyres (4/6/2009 6:07:00 AM)

    An interesting poem Eyan, containing the sadness of a broken relationship followed by chauvinistic reaction told with a touch of humour....10+

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  • Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (4/6/2009 6:06:00 AM)

    the conversation style of this poem brings the picture to mind...regarding the girls decision i cannot say...i do't anything about the guy

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  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (4/6/2009 5:52:00 AM)

    it will begin again.........dont worry..........

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  • Allemagne RoßmannAllemagne Roßmann (4/6/2009 5:45:00 AM)

    Real tall caribbean masculine and megalomaniac response...like it....++++10. Sir well done.

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  • sumaira .....ir (4/4/2009 3:08:00 PM)

    hehehehe nice man! !
    lovely! ! ++++++++++++++10
    lvvvvvvvvvvvvv u
    sumi

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