It's Your Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

It's Your

Rating: 5.0


it's your
the smiling is
like the sunflower
at sun-rising radiance

the lips and teeth fetch
the distant heart too near
more than any feelings of mystic

the cheek gracefully invites
like the solid cotton punch
on luscious lips

let your hug come
like the warm cloth
of snowy winter

let the pigeon of minds fly
in the erotic bath on a moonlit night

let the world know that
nothing is big than this love


26.08.2020 Chattogram

Friday, August 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 28 August 2020

Nice poetic expression: 10+++++ let your hug come like the warm cloth on snowy winter, let the world know that nothing is bigger than our love.

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Kostas Lagos 28 August 2020

let the pigeon of minds fly in the bath on a moonlit night I wish I could seal these two lines! Fabulous poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 August 2020

Beauty of life like the sunflower! ! ! Musing along with a smile on your face. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tamara Beryl Latham 28 August 2020

Great imagery and an enjoyable read. Thanks for posting. : -)

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 28 August 2020

the smile one of the emotions of man is given a meaningful interpretation/lovely write

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