Itchy Feet And Wanderlust Poem by Practicing Poetess

Itchy Feet And Wanderlust

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I know some people
Who can't seem to stay put in one place
Been bitten by the travel bug
And, now they have a taste
For always being on the move
Adventure's what they crave
They're on the go, and making tracks,
As goodbye they wave.

Friday, November 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: travelling
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 23 January 2020

I have known many such people. They might start travelling when young, but not be able to stop, as your concise poem indicates. It is important to find a permanent home if you can, I think.

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Practicing Poetess 28 January 2020

I agree that a permanent home is much better. It is expensive to live 'on the run'. Many retirees choose to travel the country and live in many places. Saw on the news where a couple was murdered at a campground they stayed at. Thanks for commenting, Michael.

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Carl Roussell 23 November 2018

The lines, 'they're on the go, and making tracks, As goodbye they wave.' do well at describing the need to see a new place

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Practicing Poetess 23 November 2018

Thank you, Carl! I always appreciate your expert critiques! : -)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2018

Some people are there who do not like to stay in one place. They love to wander here and there or like to travel. An interesting poem is beautifully penned with interesting view. An amazing sharing is done really...10

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Practicing Poetess 23 November 2018

Thank you, Kumar! : -)

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