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I've Frozen Time & Space

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Fleeting as an ocean wave;
once, surge waters knocked us both for six. 'I know-
and it is as if only-yesterday for me.
I held your hand in mine a lifetime ago.
Still, it holds at its highest peak.'
It doesn't reach the shoreline or turn tail & run,
someplace inside of me quite-unique-
I've frozen time & space; honestly, it doesn't succumb,
never do I forget how clear-
our waters coursed through our veins.

Never do I forget the oceans I'd bleed?
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I've Frozen Time & Space
Tuesday, March 6, 2018
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James G Brennan 28 May 2020

Very enjoyable poem Mark, congratulations on poem of the day.

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Mark Heathcote 28 May 2020

Very kind of you, James thank you!

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Muzahidul Reza 09 March 2018

the oceans I'd bleed, well imagery, congrats and thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 March 2018

Of every-soul! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kim Barney 08 March 2018

Mark, Congrats on poem of the day, and nice picture to go with it!

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Akhtar Jawad 08 March 2018

Love can freeze time and space, love can melt it, love can evaporate it and love can ionize it even. Love is dynamic it goes on modifying its magic and everything inside and outside modifies accordingly. A great poem, Mark Heathcote, congrats!

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Halifax Wright 08 March 2018

An extra fine poem. Congratulations on your poem of the day.

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Ashika Murali Acharya 08 March 2018

Beautifully written poetry, enjoyed substance and expressions. Full vote!

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 March 2018

Romantic poem flows well with the time and space. Beautiful write. Congratulations on member poem of the day!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 March 2018

The poem is as beautiful as the title. Congratulations for being picked as members POD.

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James Mclain 08 March 2018

Mark, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

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