Jayakrishnan Aluva! ! ! Poem by Shahzia Batool

Jayakrishnan Aluva! ! !

Rating: 4.5


Extra special diamond Soul
Plays a strong and silent role

Joys and pains of life conceives
Filth and fairness both perceives

His gem being gets always thrilled
At lovely scenes beauty-filled

His pictures capture sunset shades
Blows of breeze in valley-glades

Starry-gloss and moonlit shine
On cedars, willows, Oaks and pines

Fragrant, fruity, citron trees,
Buds, blossoms, birds and bees

Burning edge of turquoise sky
Singing floating birds on high

You glut your sorrows on his page
Set free of dolor, passions, rage

Good or bad he nothing hides
Shows with care both the sides

Havoc caused by summer-rains
Watered streets and blocked drains

Pics of thirst, hunger, wants
Terror scene that really haunts

All life stirring he observes
Feels the pain on noble nerves

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A humble tribute to Jayakrishnan Aluva who offers his substantial contributions and services to human society on a social media channel through his non-verbal effective communication. His focused postings show the spirit of an idealist & a reformer.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yasmin Khan 21 May 2013

A befitting tribute to a person who is compassionate and a reformer in neat rhythm and nice flow.

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Valerie Dohren 21 May 2013

I do not know of this person, but your tribute is excellent and beautifully written Shahzia. So many lovely descriptive lines, a joy to read.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 May 2013

A nice tribute, wonderfully rhymed, a lovely style 10

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Wahab Abdul 21 May 2013

wow! what a tribute to a man, it must be fitting for him, and kudos to the poetess fr writing a gem, really, language, i mean here use of words and wind -gust like flow flourished, sweet and lovely..10/10

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Gajanan Mishra 21 May 2013

good or bad nothing hides, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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M Asim Nehal 30 September 2015

Great tribute, I liked it.

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Ramesh Rai 15 June 2013

a great tribute. a good flow in writing

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 06 June 2013

A perfect description of a wonderful friend. Every word is the truth and respect.

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Passionate Reader 25 May 2013

a great tribute! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! this is one of your qualities that you use beautiful rhyming pattern which adds to the beauty of your work! ! ! the tribute is brilliantly written thus presenting all the qualities of another great poet! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! loved it! ! !

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Payal Parande 24 May 2013

how humble ...and full of respect....a great tribute

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