*just A Little Mistake, Daddy* Poem by mimzy sue

*just A Little Mistake, Daddy*

Rating: 3.1


He was the best human being i've ever known,
He was as gentle as a lamb
He loved me more than anybody could've
But he made me cry

I was his little princess
I still would've..........
If he had'nt left me
I cried the whole night you left me daddy

I used to wonder if i was the reason
Or was it because of mommy? ?
This I would never know.......
I wish i 'd find out someday....

Or Is she better than us? ? ?
Did she love you more than we do?
I longed for you every single day,
Wishing that you'd come back..

I saw there lying on his death bed
I wished to hugg him
But he had another princess
My heart bled and broken into pieces..

I saw regret in his eyes
Tears were falling on his cheek
It was too damn late to turn back
He died a broken Heart......

'Just a little mistake, daddy'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 23 October 2008

Compassion pours from every line of this tender-hearted poem about the tragic consequences of family breakdown. Let us hope that this honest and impassioned expression of your feelings of loss and betrayal may enable you to begin the long road to acceptance and forgiveness. I used to tell my kids that there's always enough love to go round, because as the family grows, so does the love, like Adam Lindsay's Magic Puddin'. I'm sure your Daddy adored his little girl to the end. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Angeline Snowboy 19 October 2008

aww it made me cry! very good written! best wishes =)

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Reshma Ramesh 09 October 2008

aweeeeeeeeeee so sad........well written

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Ivor Hogg 09 October 2008

Unanswerable questions posed in poetic prose.

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Asif Andalib 09 October 2008

A piece of pathetic practical experience described in so beautiful manner! It deserves 10.

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O Anna Niemus 09 January 2009

God forgive us all who have in so many ways shattered the lives of others .. Father forgive us for we knew not what we did

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Reetessh Sabrr 06 November 2008

can relate with u dear...only the poet can create the magic of of even grief. 10+

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Emily Oldham 31 October 2008

so sad... but a really great poem...

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Shimon Weinroth 25 October 2008

beware of the Electra Syndrome, the tribute has many mixed emotions and is well presented,10 what about more poems cheers Shimon

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Jerry Hughes 24 October 2008

Never regret the love you had for your father Mary, regardless of the circumstances I'm certain he loved you just as much. Why wouldn't he?

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