Just Call Me Darling Poem by aung si myanmar

Just Call Me Darling

Rating: 4.6


Would you like to visit to mausoleum?
Lots of beauties say, 'Warmly welcome.'
You will stick majestic ornaments
If eyes are allowed just to glance.

Would you like to feel music of love?
Romantic songs promise, 'Vibrate the heart.'
You will crack trace of melancholy
If ears are allowed just to be hungry.

Would you like to risk an airy maze?
Lust of fame motivates, 'Be brave! '
You will meet nucleus of meek fragrance
If nose is allowed just to take a breath.

Would you like to taste enchanting thrill?
Roar of heartbeat applauds, 'Wonderful female! '
You will be namby-pamby essence of bliss
If lips are allowed just to accept a kiss.

Would you like to create stunning poesy?
Even machismo murmurs, 'Sedate Peri! '
Nib will penetrate cells of cute skin.
All you need is just call me Darling.(Darling! ! !)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 31 October 2012

I agree with Eindaray, this poem is strange, but so powerful and meaningful we should focus to get the spiritual message of this work liked it my friend.

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Elena Sandu 31 October 2012

Wish I could know what those words means: Sedate peri... Beautiful poem, romantic and very sweet at first read but if I would go more deep oh dear it might say in the same time come but stay away.... I could always be wrong of course, even so this poem is quite interesting, thank you for share.

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Hla Thandarwai 31 October 2012

During exam days, u create this poem.May be so hurry but not bad. 'Warmly welcome.''Vibrate the heart.' 'Be brave! ' 'Wonderful female! ''Sedate Peri! ' These verses show what u feel in your chest.Enjoyed it.Keep it up! ! ! ! !

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Asif Andalib 29 October 2012

It's a somewhat dark poem and there is an excess preposition in the first line. It would be better if you write Would you like to visit mausoleum? Anyway I like it.

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Eindaray Kyaw 29 October 2012

I think this poem may be one of the poems that are a little bit strange and also show your spirit at the same time...but I am not sure! Any how, I tried to understand this nice one and thanks coz i got a lot of ideas from your poem...Cheer!

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 01 September 2015

Very entertaining posing a number of questions which makes the reader pause and think.

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[email protected] Mismanos 29 December 2012

Congrats for writing wonderfully!

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Babatunde Aremu 05 December 2012

Great write. There 'ifs' in all life trips. Every desire depends on something or the other. Well written

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Sanjay Mehta 04 December 2012

Existence in this world is because for every positive note there exists an negative one. Neither can be ignored. To be loved and accepted an strong balance has to be maintained with all the five senses, one should be clear as to his limitations, when to begin and when to stop. This you will accept is quite complex.

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Rishit Desai 30 November 2012

A brilliant piece. Truly amazing work.

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