Luwi Habte

Rookie (19 march / Asmara)

Just Married - Poem by Luwi Habte

She is beautiful
For the man who is grateful

He is smart
For the girl who is so cute

They are getting married
At the very special period
With the blessing of their parents
They are having a new life parts

So

He is your heaven sent
Direct, not vent
So be his super human
And be her good man

Blessed marriage
Let it stay for too long ages

Dedicated to GG and FT
simon and lula


Comments about Just Married by Luwi Habte

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (5/3/2010 2:38:00 PM)


    amazing write by the two souls yet bound by earthly knot, let there be love blooming at the alter of unison, passionate write as their lives flow across the journey onward being guided by His kindly light, well penned,10+++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (5/3/2010 2:38:00 PM)


    amazing write by the two souls yet bound by earthly knot, let there be love blooming at the alter of unison, passionate write as their lives flow across the journey onward being guided by His kindly light, well penned,10+++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (4/27/2010 8:40:00 PM)


    Congrats to them
    I hope they like this
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  • Aastha Uppal (4/25/2010 5:57:00 AM)


    beautiful work...like the way it reflects how just a mere custom binds two beings, the expectations rising on both the sides from each other, the way how the two become special for one another.. and all this just because of one custom- marriage...
    amazingly well written! !
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  • (4/24/2010 7:53:00 PM)


    I just read your Just Married; and found it to be very inspiring. Marriage is sacred and you made it so in your poem. A very good write. Lynn (Report) Reply

  • (4/24/2010 4:39:00 PM)


    it is vary sweet and had a vary good meaning i liked it and how it was worded i hope to hear more soon =) (Report) Reply

  • (4/24/2010 3:38:00 PM)


    Well a lovely you made there, I liked it. +10 (Report) Reply

  • (4/24/2010 3:02:00 PM)


    i likes it (: (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2010 1:39:00 PM)


    I think my favorite line is 'He is your heaven sent, Direct not vent' 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2010 10:34:00 AM)


    very good. sometimes though i believe marraige has a lot of different aspects to it. i wouldnt know but living in a devorced family and marrying again.... it changes you.: ( (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2010 2:31:00 PM)


    Marriage is a great union of man and woman, this poem says the feelings expressed by both (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2010 2:01:00 PM)


    ‘…He is your heaven sent/Direct, not vent…’

    Fabulous lines … enjoyed.... ‘sent’ and ‘vent’ are well chosen…
    Voted 10+
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 22, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 18, 2011


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