Just You And Me… ❤️ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Just You And Me… ❤️

Rating: 5.0


I reside between your breaths
like the moon between stars
like the waves in the ocean
like the wind passing leaves
like the birds crossing the mountains

You relax between my arms
like the fishes in the pond
like the flowers on the thorns
like the tongue between the teeth

We live together
like the mountains in springtime
like oasis in the desert

Our life is one
like a single soul in two bodies

Just you and me…..❤️

Sunday, August 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2020

Moon resides between stars and waves reside between ocean. Like you remain inside love of universal arms. Life becomes one in love. The mountain peak is built in oneness. An amazing love poem is beautifully penned with much beauty....10

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Varsha M 30 August 2020

Very true words. Very true feelings. Thanks.

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Sharad Bhatia 30 August 2020

यकीन मान तुझसे प्यार करना चाहता हूँ दो शरीर एक जान होना चाहता हूँ थाम ले मेरा हाथ तुझे धड़कन और मैं तेरी साँसे बनना चाहता हूँ बहुत बेहतरीन प्यार 100++

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S H 30 August 2020

Nice one but instead of using so many similes you could have used some metaphors.

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Darren Jkoeryo 03 September 2020

Just wow will say a lot.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 September 2020

Just the two of us! ! Just you and me; Love and art. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 September 2020

We live together like the mountains in springtime like oasis in the desert Our life is one like a single soul in two bodies Just you and me…..❤️.......full of loving poem; nice to read; enjoyable

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Bwangwa Yukoshu 01 September 2020

There is no dearth of talent in India. Your poems proves that you are one of them.

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Prabha Devi 31 August 2020

Yes only two loving soul and nobody else to enjoy the nature's beauty. Nice poem.

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