Justice Part 2 Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Justice Part 2

Rating: 4.8


I'm walking
I'm walking
I can hear
The hospital talking

Doctor death
Wants to get
In my head

Laid me on the bed
Put electrodes
To my head
Blasted me
Till I'm nearly dead

They knew I'd confessed
With voices
In my head

Now they was
Trying to make
Me dead

Did they think
I wouldn't survive
Did they think
I'd go and hide

As the years
Rolled by
My demons
Said goodbye

Now it's time
To have justice
On my side
Doctor death
You can't hide
It's justice time

Monday, September 19, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: justice
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lovable Wisdom 21 September 2011

i wonder wat influenced u t2 write a pecie like this

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Kufre Udeme 21 September 2011

You know, Dave, at times it is good to leave justice for the Creator... One thing I like about the poem is the length.

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Alie Lonk 20 September 2011

Oooohh..very like..is so strong.justice... justice....! ! ! !

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Chance Topliss 20 September 2011

good poem it has truth in it good job

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Vipins Puthooran 20 September 2011

Wow, i like it.. Wonderful poem.. Life lies in between justice and injustice sometimes..nice concept..

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Whispering Rose 11 November 2011

I love the way you write, it keeps me interested till the very last word and wanting more

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Ramesh Rai 08 November 2011

justice never dies, justice finds its own level. nice poem. full marks. sorry for delay.

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Juan Olivarez 24 September 2011

I think the poem is great, but remember, justice is mine, sayeth the lord.

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Kalpak Kaplash 23 September 2011

justice...nice thought dave

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Malaya Roses 22 September 2011

Human might be able to gain a real justice after he could kill the demon within and I believed that the poet was found his way to welcome the truth and fear nothing in his life. Well done! ! !

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