Justice With No Lie Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Justice With No Lie

Rating: 4.9

An innocent man
lies his head down to rest
not wanting to wake
to the morning sun

Instead wanting to wake
in a parallel universe
where truth and justice
is number one

In the real world
his days seem like years
they eat away at his
mind body and soul

If a witness would lie
he knows he might die
before truth and justice
Would see the light
but he's got to keep up the fight

All he wants
is justice with no lie
so come forward
and let truth and justice
shine it's light

Eric Cockrell 10 January 2012

very well written, well conceived, good perceptions!

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Dead Rose 10 January 2012

Well- consecutive thoughts.......10****** Rose))))))

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Deep Mukherjee 11 January 2012

As beautiful as it can get.........

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Deep Mukherjee 11 January 2012

Again outstanding.....seeking for justice in a parallel world and the contradiction within add to the flavor of your poem...........

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Silentpoet Grl 11 January 2012

really everything about this poem is wonderful - truly a great write

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Chinedu Dike 05 May 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Federico del Corazón 16 January 2012

Dave this is a really good poem, technically written and well said. Everything flowed and you brought your reader in your world. Thank you for the invitation. Great descriptive and powerful message. I can hear a “rough neck” howling this anthem of truth demanding honesty. Good job my friend!

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Makhosonke Dhlamini 15 January 2012

Have you notice that you have dedicated this poem to posterity, this is classic. I thank you for being a poet and GOD for giving you a thinking cap.

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Lawrence H 13 January 2012

Hi, Dave Walker I love all your poems as your poems are very direct and easy to understand. Each stanza or a line in a poem consists only 4 to 8 syllables which also called a short-lined. Your poem is a free verse and loosely rhythm, the texture, or the movement of lines. Your poem style is very similar like mine. Kudos to you, Dave Walker..You are an Excellent and creative poet. I rated this poem 10/10..Perfect score for everything....

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Pheko Motaung 13 January 2012

Beautiful.Let's all respect truth.

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