Dave Alan Walker

Gold Star - 10,701 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Justice With No Lie - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

An innocent man
lies his head down to rest
not wanting to wake
to the morning sun

Instead wanting to wake
in a parallel universe
where truth and justice
is number one

In the real world
his days seem like years
they eat away at his
mind body and soul

If a witness would lie
he knows he might die
before truth and justice
Would see the light
but he's got to keep up the fight

All he wants
is justice with no lie
so come forward
and let truth and justice
shine it's light


Comments about Justice With No Lie by Dave Alan Walker

  • Chinedu Dike (5/5/2015 5:59:00 AM)

    Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report)Reply

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  • Federico del Corazón (1/16/2012 4:48:00 PM)

    Dave this is a really good poem, technically written and well said.
    Everything flowed and you brought your reader in your world. Thank you for the invitation. Great descriptive and powerful message. I can hear a “rough neck” howling this anthem of truth demanding honesty. Good job my friend!
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  • (1/15/2012 3:13:00 AM)

    Have you notice that you have dedicated this poem to posterity, this is classic.
    I thank you for being a poet and GOD for giving you a thinking cap.
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  • Lawrence H (1/13/2012 6:13:00 AM)

    Hi, Dave Walker

    I love all your poems as your poems are very direct and easy to understand.
    Each stanza or a line in a poem consists only 4 to 8 syllables which also called a short-lined.
    Your poem is a free verse and loosely rhythm, the texture, or the movement of lines. Your poem style is very similar like mine. Kudos to you, Dave Walker..You are an Excellent and creative poet. I rated this poem 10/10..Perfect score for everything....
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  • (1/13/2012 4:48:00 AM)

    Beautiful.Let's all respect truth. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/11/2012 1:58:00 PM)

    Wonderful piece... The last two stanzas sound like a command... Truth is the eye of the credible witness... (Report)Reply

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  • (1/11/2012 5:42:00 AM)

    really everything about this poem is wonderful - truly a great write (Report)Reply

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  • (1/11/2012 2:26:00 AM)

    Again outstanding.....seeking for justice in a parallel world and the contradiction within add to the flavor of your poem........... (Report)Reply

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  • (1/11/2012 1:55:00 AM)

    As beautiful as it can get......... (Report)Reply

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  • (1/10/2012 12:59:00 PM)

    Well- consecutive thoughts.......10******
    Rose))))))
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  • (1/10/2012 11:36:00 AM)

    very well written, well conceived, good perceptions! (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (1/10/2012 4:53:00 AM)

    For me, if it's justice automatically it's mean no lie...justice is purest shape of voice... Your poem really indicating a justice for good so very great poem is my justification for you my big brother...Justice should not appear in court but the mind of anyone...Who ever ruin the justice so The most Justice will treat them very justice as a punishment..._Unwritten Soul (Report)Reply

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  • (1/10/2012 4:02:00 AM)

    The poem is great, the concept of parallel universe is good. Thanks for sharing such a great poem.... (Report)Reply

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  • Jacqui Broad (1/9/2012 6:33:00 AM)

    Justice with no lie is what we, the innocent people, long for. A magnificent poem, my friend. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 8, 2012



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