Faint bells tinkling in the background....
The night utters a soulful sigh,
To see Radha and Krishna
Bound in embrace. The full moon cries....
There's strange magic in the air....
Jasmines spreading their incense.
Flutes sing, to celebrate the pair.
Passions rise. Intense....
The sky illumines,
By sheer fire set ablaze
Stars fiercely twinkling
The God's! Heavenly amazed.....
The Gopis start trickling out of their homes.
Struck with love's lightning in a daze
Getting drawn towards Krishna
Spellbound in his gaze
Rivers heaving and rising
Carrying love in their bosom
Drenched in ecstasy. They succumb,
To the feet of their divine lover
This is just beautiful Tranquil Ocean, if felt so real in the read. Brought tears to my eyes infact. The two gets in the middle felt out of sync, a little too jarring perhaps, an edit would smooth this poems gorgeous way to perfect, imo. Thank you so much for sharing it. Oceanonic Diviner, Tai
great poem, R...the hindu gods are so human...naughty and sensual...their characters types are found in bits and pieces in everybody...love...nalini
Its just brilliant, you've presented them in such intense light. Preets
Radheya Radheya! ! Krsna Krsna! ! You needed that inspiration to write and HE (you know who) gave you the reason. And what a better way than to start the collection-list with the poem on Radheya Krsna! You are the most BLESSED one and will be LOVED for a long time. Radheya Radheya! ! Krsna Krsna! !
A great read and a good history lesson for me. Thankyou for sharing Tranquil---Melvina-
The Indian Culture has always facinated me from the neru, jackets to the elaborate craftworkby hand....this is a wonderful piece, T.O....IIt sparkles with the essence of Tradition &Spirituality...Job well done'''''''''''FJR
Great poem with well flowment of motion. I myself believe only in one God(The God and most holy father of Jesus Christ. We all have our own beliefs and heroes and gods. Hadda give this one a ten for being awesome. May any and all gods bless all poets-MJG.
Yes, I know about Lord Vishnu, I have read some stuff about it. Great poem, easy flowing! *~*Elya Thorn*~*
Hi Tranquil, It's nice to see you share about a different religions. My mother is a shinto, my sons are catholics and I was baptized in the Japanese United Church. (ha ha) My son Gordie loves to read on Budhism. So I am open to any religion. God is God what ever one believes does not bother me. I think it makes our world a very unique place to live in. Excellent Poem and take care.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very very nice, sweet poem Love dave xxx