Kavita 07 - I Am Obsessed With My Love For You Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Kavita 07 - I Am Obsessed With My Love For You

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Some mistakes it is impossible to forget
There is someone haunting my memories
And love's so intoxicating like wine
Once it affects your heart
The joy never comes down.
I too would've enjoyed, my beloved,
The pleasure of your love
Had there been no pain
Of the separation from you.
I would have tried to pull on
Erasing all your memories
But my obsession with my love for you
Does not allow me.

This is a translation of the poem Tere Ishq Ka Junoon by KAVITA SINGH
Friday, February 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Translation of poem 'Tere Ishq Ka Junoon' by Kavita Singh.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 13 February 2017

I truly admire Miss Kavita's poetic skills and your amazing skills as a translator. Thank you very much indeed for sharing this great piece. A big 10.

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 February 2017

Thank you, Nosheen. I shall convey your words of appreciation to Kavita, as it she who deserves them. As far as my skills of translation are concerned, I am still not that confident. But sure, your words make my day. Thank you Nosheen. Sir jhukata hun...

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Susan Williams 09 February 2017

There is someone haunting my memories- - - - Amazing how one simple line can evoke so many emotions. Thank you for translating this poem. Without you performing this act, the rest of us at PH would not get to know this author's work.

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 February 2017

Hi Susan, Thank you for reading this lovely poem by Kavita. I still am skeptical whether I have done a good translation... I would definitely convey your appreciation to her. And thanks gain...

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 07 February 2017

Obsessed feelings reveal the endless desire, superb work dear poet

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 February 2017

Hi saraswathy, This poem too is just a translation of poem by Kavita. She deserves all your appreciation. Thank you...

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 February 2017

'The joy never comes down'! Thanks for sharing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 February 2017

Sir, Thank you reading this poem. Your appreciation, I know, is for the original. I have tried to do this translation, so that star poets like you could enjoy the exquisite poems of Ms Kavita Singh. She is truly a talented poet and deserves all the accolades.

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Jaya Das 03 February 2017

Yet again a well articulated poetry...I need to read the original Hindi version this is nice....

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 February 2017

Hi Jaya, Please do read the original, which is really wonderful poem. My translation is a poor image of it.. Thank you Jaya, once again..

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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