kanav justa

Veteran Poet - 1,531 Points (Shimla)

Killing Time Or Vice Versa - Poem by kanav justa

Shadows symmetry
From the beam of the sun
Leisurely distorts

Sun in no way changes
It's we who burn
Wickedly the wheel of time does turn

Comments about Killing Time Or Vice Versa by kanav justa

  • (12/15/2012 5:56:00 AM)

    Time is irrevocable, it's how we use it that matters. (Report) Reply

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  • Neetha Sasidharan (12/13/2012 1:49:00 AM)

    wee yet so capturing......kp going... (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (12/12/2012 9:04:00 AM)

    it's totally great and a true art. i feel honored to read this perfect work
    well done.
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  • Unwritten Soul (12/12/2012 7:03:00 AM)

    Creative! ! ! ! ! ! ...but i dont wish to kill the time otherwise we will killed in the moment as we breathing it together in our lung and memories, just wish to reverse some part of life and rejoice again or redo to fix mistakes, bring back the ceased loved ones...if we can do that...that is awesome to wander the briliant time point...stay to be a kid without worries just happy and play fun....._Soul (Report) Reply

  • Wabi Sabi (12/12/2012 6:29:00 AM)

    got both angles to see one thing do. you are romantic! (Report) Reply

  • Stevie Taite (12/11/2012 6:42:00 AM)

    I love also the first part, just watching the shadows change with the Earths revolution (Report) Reply

  • Stevie Taite (12/11/2012 6:41:00 AM)

    Really good mate! Short but says a lot in my opinion. Grasp every second, with an almighty oven glove if need be! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 11, 2012

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