Kisses Of The Thunder Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Kisses Of The Thunder

Rating: 3.2


Why To Wonder
for the rain,
try to ponder
..................
It Is a clash of the clouds
It is kisses of the thunder
...............................
try to ponder
From summser born the winter

to be continued

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*_sakura ~daisy_* 02 July 2009

i like this very much i wish to read more...hmm great pictures and emotions. keep writing^^

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a brilliant verse! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Brishti Mazumdar 28 June 2009

...simple...so touched me...loved it...Brishti

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Kristina B; Williams 28 June 2009

i read 2 of your poems kiss of thunder, and the dress, funny, cute, and sweet, simple, n to the point...

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awesome piece! ! ! short but thought provoking.. you made me think a lot at the last line...thanks you deserve a 10+++++ best regards, jdh

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Anthony Foster 22 August 2009

O for a violent kiss that causes rain, a summer formed from passion. thought provoking and very good comunication.10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 July 2009

It is a violent kiss of clouds that thunders on the sky, but the result is good as it turns into rain for the benefit of the earth.

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Ben Gieske 30 July 2009

Great piece. These two lines are excellent. It Is a clash of the clouds It is kisses of the thunder

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Broken Heart 16 July 2009

koool poem! ! ! ! 10++

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Akram Awadat 07 July 2009

wonderful poem, deep meaning 10+

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