Last Kisses For Last Love Poem by adheez van der beanthz
Last Kisses For Last Love
lips by lips
breath by breath
here we meet
let's forget the rest
i hug you closer
your hand in my shoulder
fondle my frozen-skin
burning every single inch
our tongues make a sign
our heartbeat write the rhyme
for a second, i mute the time
wander to your deepest mind
hope this moment last longer
no matter if we wake-up the world anger
i'll be stronger, i'll be better
as long as we stay together, forever
until the death come for sure...
earthzcity,240713
Very evocative Adheez some extremely delicate and amazing rhymes especially in the middle section our tongues make a sign our heartbeat write the rhyme for a seconds, i mute the time wander to your deepest mind Powerfully descriptive sentiments with strong imagery convey the perfect euphoria of first love discovered. a true gem of clear themes
A sensatiönal sensual fine poem enjoyable to read. Pls read my poems too esp d one on fasting.
Excellent write, dreamlike, last kisses for last love...it expresses love of undying tenderness.
Great composing dear Adheez. no matter if we wake-up the world anger i'll be stronger, i'll be better as long as we stay together, forever until the death come for sure... Beautiful lines!
I love the pace and meter in this; it goes from a slow, steady beat to something faster and yet still steady, somehow. Just like a quickening heartbeat. Wonderful. Please do feel free to take a look at some of my writing.
woooow: D perfect i liked your rhyming in this poem very much.
Quite beautiful and passionate poems. And forever is what we all wish for.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 7:43:34 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Intimate love expressed in scintillating language.10.