Last Letter To My Father. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

It's really sad, but its deep and strong I think its a good piece

I like the line, 'the one you left in the stormy weather.' Great imagery. Nice work.

this poem is beautifull you spelt maybe as 'maybee' tho.. im not sure that is the correct spelling.. sorry i tend to pick out the small faults but yer your poem is brilliantly worded... i look forward to reading more of your poems luv lisa xo : -)

I wouldn't let it be your last letter...sometimes there's a reason behind silence or absence. :)

sorry for being too late this poem reveal how life is so hard for some, I hope your father will read it and realize the pain you feel wonderful poem 9/10

Wow I can feel your hurt in your poem, may you come to know the Love of a Heavenly Father that is found in Jesus Christ the Lord. God Bless You. John 3: 16- For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life.

this poem is awesome-i like every bit of it-it's a shame good poems come from pain-10++++

Awrite that comes straight from the heart and goes straight to the heart.

this poem is great. i can visulize the pain it must have caused.

this is a very beautiful poem that you have written here Jose. I truly enjoyed it. tres bien.! Hazel G.E